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#1 Biohazard

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Posted 23 August 2005 - 12:27 AM

This is my first space piece, so tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is greatley appreciated, since I need to improve :P

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#2 -Michael-

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Posted 23 August 2005 - 04:43 AM

Wayyyyy too much negative space. But it's pretty good otherwise.

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Posted 23 August 2005 - 10:58 AM

the detail in it is great..i dont think theres too much negative space for what hes showing...maybe a bright star in the bg would help tho....looks sweet

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Posted 23 August 2005 - 11:25 AM

Wow, great job, but too much empty black :)

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Posted 23 August 2005 - 04:00 PM

I commented on DA, but I personally love it. It gives the feeling of isolation.

Great Work for being a first time too.

Best Regards,

Jason :)

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#6 Biohazard

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Posted 23 August 2005 - 04:01 PM

Thanks for the feedback people!

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Posted 23 August 2005 - 04:55 PM

Sweeet :D though the stars are a little too gray, the inner bright thing needs some more colours/detail in my opinion :hi: i think the clouds are great, though the lowest cloud is a bit too "smudgy" nice highlites :D

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Posted 23 August 2005 - 06:39 PM

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Posted 24 August 2005 - 04:21 PM

Liking that! I love that colour, really does suit that image well. Imo i cant really find any fault with it, good job! :P

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Posted 24 August 2005 - 05:48 PM

hey that looks like a lot of work. i like it overall. G8(great)





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