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[hoor]

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Hi all

I have made this design in photoshop and i am happy with it so far. Its still not complete and i need to put the last touches but I need your honest opinion guys and your crtitique. I am still a begginer and I need your opinions and crituques to improve my self.


Thanks all

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[esperant]

did you just blend them or designed the whole image. although what ever you did with made it look improved a bit than just a first time. good try keep woking.

[Cadillac Ranch]

Hmm.. I'll warn you ahead of time, I'm very harsh. I will try and be nice. I will try and keep it short but detailed enough to maybe help you.

To make it simpler for you, I will list a few things I think that need to be changed in point form, I'm not saying you must change them... obviously, but to me I think it would brighten it up... a lot.

*I'm not sure if you used textures or just played with GradMaps, but if you used textures, use more... defined ones?
*Take some of the color/texture away from the image, make a layer mask, take the airbrush eraser tool, set it to a lower opacity, then play around and try and take some off but not too much. It'll let the images come out a little bit, this can help the graphic or ruin it so be careful!
*The brushes don't really "go" with the image... Well personally I don't think that... but you can keep 'em and it'll still be fine.
*The border type thing you've got going on needs to go.

That's about it, please do realize I aimed to takeout all the BAD things and not the good. This way it is more helpful. I find the way it is a fairly nice graphic, practice makes perfect!

Sorry if that was a tad harsh, but I really think you could develop great talents if you worked hard on it.

[hoor]

Hi guys

I really thank you a lot for your critques and i really rate my graphic as poor now .


Special Thanks for Cadillac Ranch for your effort and your help.

uuum about the image i used, it was really an image and i just converted it to a pattern and i started to play with the colors and appllied some blending effects. Thats all what i did.
By the way, Can i ask what is the airbrush tool and how and when can i use it?

Anyway, thanks again all and i am still waiting for your comments !