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#1 syntex

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 04:09 AM

Ok this is my first vector ive actually finished and i know its not the best
but hey, And I AM working on skin techniques so yeah,
Dont be too mean, ANY tips would be helpful :doh:

http://www.deviantar...ation/23496777/

EDIT: Nearly forgot, Thanks InFnit for the help with the hair :blink:

Edited by syntex, 30 September 2005 - 06:32 AM.


#2 InFnit

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 06:14 AM

Mmm...I can't load it - maybe upload to the forums

#3 syntex

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 06:34 AM

Added a dA Link, Should work :blink:

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 06:38 AM

Lil' more detail on the eye would make it look a lot better :doh:

Great job for your first :blink:

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 10:47 AM

That is fantastic for your first vector Syntex! But the colors on her face are a little too harsh, try and blend them a little bit so they don't seem so... strong.

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 10:58 AM

wow, this is really good for a first, but like CKristian said, more detail on the eye, everything is detailed except the eye...very nice though :tiphat:

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 11:32 AM

Wow, that beats my first attempt at a vector out of the water. I agree with the comments on the eyes and also the comment about making the face tones more gradual, if those two things were done it would be AWESOME

WEEEE THIS IS MY 100th post (I feel special) :popcorn:

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 01:38 PM

Really cool... eyes need more work and also the face looks to aggresive and splodgey.. the hair is brill :popcorn:

#9 syntex

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 02:39 PM

All Hair crediit to InFnit, Thanks bud

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 03:50 PM

ya looks sweet 4 your first but ya u need more skin tones so it looks more blended....takes more time but the outcome is much better

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 03:51 PM

really nice to be your first :P

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 03:56 PM

Lol syntex you were supposed to add on top of it more hair!

Next time I think you should do it the way I advised, that way it's not so harsh steps from one layer to the next.

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 04:42 PM

what program do you use for vector? photoshop? just wondering :P

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 04:50 PM

I commented on DA. :) Great Job!

Best Regards,

Jason :P

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 05:44 PM

Yup he used Photoshop CS2 I believe...you did a great job on this for your first *completed* vector.

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 05:55 PM

Yea, I wanna learn to do vector some day :P

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 08:38 PM

Thanks for all da comments guys and PSGirl(Dont think i 4got ya)
Ill get better at it SOME day and then ill get more advanced :P

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Posted 30 September 2005 - 08:38 PM

Thanks for all da comments guys and PSGirl(Dont think i 4got ya)
Ill get better at it SOME day and then ill get more advanced :P





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