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#1 fatboy

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Posted 01 October 2005 - 10:14 PM

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#2 Appenzeller

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Posted 01 October 2005 - 10:47 PM

I think its prety good

#3 jat543

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Posted 01 October 2005 - 11:05 PM

the wing looks liek it has a square edge, fix that and itll be good

#4 fatboy

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Posted 01 October 2005 - 11:55 PM

ok thanks yea i got to fix that

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Posted 02 October 2005 - 01:23 AM

looks good to me :tiphat:

#6 Phazon Eater

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Posted 02 October 2005 - 11:24 AM

The background is pretty cool and the text is decent, but the cut on the stock is really bad.

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Posted 02 October 2005 - 11:27 AM

Pretty nice work, not too sure if the render blends in well enough, I'd think softer colours on the background might look better. And get it under 60KB before you use it, if you use it. :lol:

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Posted 03 October 2005 - 09:06 PM

Pretty good for a nobby~!

Um yeh the wing needs some work and the text - change of text and maybe some text effects

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#9 fatboy

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Posted 04 October 2005 - 05:29 PM

Tasha, on Oct 2 2005, 04:27 PM, said:

Pretty nice work, not too sure if the render blends in well enough, I'd think softer colours on the background might look better. And get it under 60KB before you use it, if you use it. :unsure:
o yea sorry

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Posted 04 October 2005 - 09:51 PM

Its like Phazon said
its good, but that cut ruins it
the rest is ok ^^





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