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#1 Xfader

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Posted 20 October 2005 - 01:15 PM

Hi a begin for my portfolio, what do ya think ?

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#2 Xfader

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Posted 21 October 2005 - 11:32 AM

no thoughts ? :blink:

#3 hobulus

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Posted 21 October 2005 - 01:28 PM

I think it is just really plain, tats why you haven had too many comments...
Perhaps work at making it an interface of some sort.
Or at least designing a banner and a logo of sorts...
At the moment it seems like it is just text on a background!

Spend a little more time and ythen re post and I am sure the rest of P2L will be more than happy to give their comments!

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#4 Bryn

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Posted 21 October 2005 - 08:10 PM

^^ I agree.
Show us more content etc...

#5 -Michael-

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Posted 21 October 2005 - 09:25 PM

Yeah, it could use an interface.

#6 Lift

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Posted 21 October 2005 - 11:48 PM

Right now it just looks like a page with text .. doesn't resemble any type of interface or a web site ... kinda looks like a web page that is missing the header + navigation.

The other thing, that white text on black background is extremely hard on the eyes.

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Edited by Lift, 21 October 2005 - 11:49 PM.


#7 Kei-th

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Posted 22 October 2005 - 03:53 AM

It's not complete I hope?
I think you should add a simple menu on the top right of the content box





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