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#1 Yieldy

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Posted 26 October 2005 - 03:37 PM

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A render taken from 'Advent Children' Tifa Lockheart

#2 sez318

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Posted 26 October 2005 - 03:41 PM

wow...that is reallllly nice :D

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Posted 26 October 2005 - 03:41 PM

i think its cool. Just i think its too bright around the white areas.

other than that looks great

#4 Yieldy

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Posted 26 October 2005 - 03:56 PM

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made a few adjustments, better? or worse?

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Posted 26 October 2005 - 04:09 PM

Really cool. Personally I prefer the first one. It could use a one or two pixel border though.

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 12:21 AM

I like the second one better, the first one was to bright and her face was to bright and kind of hard to see..Nice work :P

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 01:04 AM

2nd one is heaps cool. Love the effects and brushing.

* great work

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 04:20 AM

I like 2nd one too, but maybe you should make the border more visible...or changing this border to another one.

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 05:58 AM

I prefer the second one too, looks a lot sharper and she is easier to see. :) I agree with PSGirl, make the border more visible, and it will look a lot better. B)

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 06:02 AM

try this border - may not fit in but give it a try~!

ok well create new layer. press ctrl a wich selectrs everything ok then go edit stroke 5 px white ( it will looks shokcing at first ) ok once down that click ok. The go to layer channel on the right bottom side and make it overlay the border. Once done that go to Filter , Blur and then gassiun blur probably maybe 3 then click ok then ctrl d.

* see how that looks

** i wanna write a tutorial for that - made it up my self

so yeh try that border if it doesnt fit - stick with the one you got looks great

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 07:17 AM

its a bit bright *pulls out sun glasses*...*swaps for solar eclipse glasses* ahhh much better :D

i like it just i think it needs a bit of balance between light and dark cause its missing the main point of the which is the rather cool render :lol: 8/10

#12 Yieldy

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 01:03 PM

thanks for all the great feedback! So what youre saying walnut is that it needs more contrast?

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I made the border more visible, changed some coloring and sharpness and played with the levels. Any better? >.< crap! forgot to blend again

Edited by Yieldy, 27 October 2005 - 01:05 PM.


#13 Phazon Eater

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 01:14 PM

Much better. As for the border, I think you should have a one pixel black on the outside, then have another layer under that with a two pixel border, the same color as you have now.

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 02:21 PM

muuuuuuuuuuuch coooooolllerrrrrr ! lol 9/10

and tbh i think the border suits it not too dark not too light just right and i did mean contrast yes but earlier everytime i tried to spell it i did it wrong :)

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 03:50 PM

much better now, really nice result. Well done :)

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 04:15 PM

agree - looks good~!

* great work

#17 sez318

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 05:15 PM

Yeah i prefer the second, Not as bright. Lovely sig though :)

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 06:06 PM

Yummy, well done.

#19 Yieldy

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Posted 27 October 2005 - 07:07 PM

haha thanks all! If you get a chance to, watch the movie FFVII: Advent Children. Its great! Its not out in the US but you can find it with the English subtitles.





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