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[wizdude]

To all of you that the girls confide in, but don't want anything more:

She talk to you,
Tells you her secrets,
Lets you in,
But she doesn't want anything,
Just to be friends.

You spend your days thinking about her,
But she thinks about some other guy,
And tells you about him,
How she loves him,
And adores him,
And wishes and wishes
While you listen intently,
Wishing to be him,
You want her to adore you,
But no,
You're just her lifeline,
Just her friend,
And nothing more,
So this is an ode to all of you,
Who aren't any more than friends.

You keep her going,
Though she doesnt realize,
She may see one day,
That you're truly what she was looking for.

So hold fast,
Stand by her,
Hold her hand,
See her through those hard times,
And walk with her through the good ones,
But don't think that it'll always be,
That you'll just be her friend.


I hope you appreciate this. If anyone is in the same boat...I'd love to hear from ya...

Edited by wizdude, 29 October 2005 - 09:23 AM.

[Griffin]

Ive always hated it when that happens...

Nice, um poem/story.

[Tasha]

Nice writing, I do like it! And I understand it a lot, has happened to me once before.

[l3lueMage]

I understand it. Nice writing too!

[adio38]

wow wiz, I could not have wrote that any better. I totaly agree, been there many times.
Here is a little poem that I wrote. I have many but this is one of my fav.

Secret Admirer

I have seen you around,
You have talked to me.
This is the time of the year,
That feelings should be told.
I am not sure how you feel,
Or the way you might act.
Working the courage up to send you flowers and a card.
Pondering on the thought,
Still not sure what to write.
Afraid of the way you may react,
So nervous I feel weak and sick.
Holding back what I want to say,
Pushing away the feelings I have for you.
I manage to squeeze out of the pen six simple words,
Happy Valentines Day
Your Secret Admirer.

Adio

[wizdude]

bravo! I love that poem...i've felt that way before. I really get it! Thats really good!

[adio38]

Thanks man, here is another, i like to write, its how i get my emotion out, other wise I always hide my emotions, i have what my teacher says is like a giant "wall" that I have up, I do not let anybody see the real me, I am very hidden. Funny how my english professor said the same thing a few years later. Haha, anyway here is another.

I Love Girls But Girls Hate Me

They are all around me,
It’s driving me crazy.
If only one showed interest,
I would be so happy.
Is it the way I look,
Maybe the way I act.
To them I took,
However they dropped me like a Book.
I love girls,
But girls hate me.
If I could have only one,
I would be so very happy.

Adio

[wizdude]

Very nice Adio. I do the same thing. I write lots of songs and poems...its stress relief. I break down if I cant write :-P

Another One

Through the bad,
The good,
The smiles and the frowns,
To the enthusiastic highs,
To the sorrowful, painful downs.
Times will pass,
And they will go,
With the roasting summers,
And glistening snow.
From the leaves in fall,
To the flowers of spring,
Time comes,
Time goes,
For everything.

But when we watch the time pass,
We have memories,
And those stay with us,
Visions here, to last and last.

The things we remember,
We look back upon,
Remeniss,
Rejoice in,
When upon us some things dawn.

Like the sun to the moon,
The glistened glory alight,
One stands for day,
And the other for night.

The sun being good,
In its warm basking glow,
The moon casts a shadow,
On the pane of my window.

As I sit here writing,
Just staring at the sky,
I am thankful for you,
In the times passing by.

[Jaymz]

I get that a lot, then they sound sad and say "I wish I could find a guy just like you".... well princess open your eyes I'm right here!!

[Bryn]

Never seen Poetry here before.
Nice poem

[adio38]

I have never showed my poems to girls before. Affraid to what the may think, I am shy when it comes to girls. One of my good friends does the same thing, me and him usually read each others and say what we think. But its funny, my friend showed one of his poems to a girl she was like "Wow, wish i could find a guy like that" haha and my buddy was like *cough*
All my poems sound sad, or are really sad, that is the only time I can really write when I am depressed. here is one i wrote in like 10th grade when I was going through some stuff in life.

That Boy

Have you ever seen That Boy,
Walking down the halls by himself,
With nobody to talk to or walk with,
That Boy knows me better than anybody around,
But in a way,
He does not know me at all.

Everyday that boy wakes up,
Everyday he looks in the mirror and wonders why he is still here,
Everyday he goes to school with the thought of death,
Every morning that boy walks by everybody
Speeding his pace,
Thinking that in a way everybody is staring at him,
Judging him,
Even Hating him.

Tormented by everything he knows,
He grabs for the gun,
Only to break down in tears,
He only wants a friend,
Instead he gets nothing but laughs,

So next time you see That Boy,
Walking down the hall by himself,
With nobody to talk or walk with,
Stop him and say hi,
Or just walk with him.

Because one day that boy will not be walking down the hall,
One day you will wonder why you never talked to him,
One day you might think about why he hurt so bad.
And if that boy is not there anymore,
I would not be here either.
Adio

Edited by adio38, 30 October 2005 - 07:28 PM.

[/quit]

Those usually doesn't happen to me, haha, I can't really remember a time when I haven't had a significant other.