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[Cerenza]

Another layout!
This one is for my mother's kennel.



What say you?

[wizdude]

Such a great layout...and you messed it up with the text. I think you should use plainer text....dunno what to say, its kinda hard to give suggestoins.

[Stu]

i really like your work cerenza - but like wizdude said, i think you have done a wrongun with regards to the text.

unfortunately i cant really say how you could fix it, cus although its a stunning layout, i really cant see it relating to a kennel in any way whatsoever

i think for something like this you should go a bit more conventional, if this was your portfolio i would say thumbs up (apart from the text ) but i think you need to rethink the design more toward the subject.

ignoring the subject of the site, its a great design though

[Cerenza]

Stu, on Nov 11 2005, 03:46 AM, said:

i really like your work cerenza - but like wizdude said, i think you have done a wrongun with regards to the text.

unfortunately i cant really say how you could fix it, cus although its a stunning layout, i really cant see it relating to a kennel in any way whatsoever

i think for something like this you should go a bit more conventional, if this was your portfolio i would say thumbs up (apart from the text ) but i think you need to rethink the design more toward the subject.

ignoring the subject of the site, its a great design though

I don't know, I tried to make it like the last layout without the vector, but you have no idea how hard it is to get photos/drawings that I can use.
I have asked my dad to take them so we will see.
This can be for my portfolio or it will be the site...time will tell, and what my "clients" rule...lol
But thaks so much for the positive feed.
Regarding the font I assume your talking about the hippy one?
I experimented with the 5G's I have of fonts, but that one actually fit best. lol

[Cerenza]

Changed font and added "Irish Wolfhounds"....I think it looks better now..

[maximum]

cool colors and nice layout!

[hobulus]

I agree with a few of the other posters.... fix the text and you will be styling. The graphics are awesome, just the font needs to match the awesomeness of the design!

[Cerenza]

hobulus, on Nov 11 2005, 03:44 PM, said:

I agree with a few of the other posters.... fix the text and you will be styling. The graphics are awesome, just the font needs to match the awesomeness of the design!

You have to name a font you would maby think would fit.
Or someone has to, because I don't get the problem with this one. lol

[Bryn]

I've seen alot better from you
I dont really like colours and I dont reckon they complement eachother atall.
Sorry

[wizdude]

well, I dont think the layout is appropriate for the site. I think a kennel site should look...i dunno...kennel-ie.

Try something more business-looking like this:

http://www.petsmart.com/ps/main.jsp


But the layout u made would be great for a design portfolio or something!

[Cerenza]

wizdude, on Nov 11 2005, 11:03 PM, said:

well, I dont think the layout is appropriate for the site. I think a kennel site should look...i dunno...kennel-ie.

Try something more business-looking like this:

http://www.petsmart.com/ps/main.jsp


But the layout u made would be great for a design portfolio or something!

Wish is why I'm making it just that. I talked to my mom and she likes the "old book" look. Papyrus with drawings..
My other style.

[Av-]

it looks allright, thought its a bit image heavy and room for content is limited

[Cerenza]

UPDATE: I desided to have this as my portfolio, and therfore changed the name:



So now it is better suited for it's perpus.