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#1 Cerenza

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Posted 10 November 2005 - 06:40 PM

Another layout! ;)
This one is for my mother's kennel. :) :)

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Posted 10 November 2005 - 08:29 PM

Such a great layout...and you messed it up with the text. I think you should use plainer text....dunno what to say, its kinda hard to give suggestoins.

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Posted 10 November 2005 - 08:46 PM

i really like your work cerenza - but like wizdude said, i think you have done a wrongun with regards to the text.

unfortunately i cant really say how you could fix it, cus although its a stunning layout, i really cant see it relating to a kennel in any way whatsoever :(

i think for something like this you should go a bit more conventional, if this was your portfolio i would say thumbs up (apart from the text :P ) but i think you need to rethink the design more toward the subject.

ignoring the subject of the site, its a great design though :)

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Posted 10 November 2005 - 09:02 PM

Stu, on Nov 11 2005, 03:46 AM, said:

i really like your work cerenza - but like wizdude said, i think you have done a wrongun with regards to the text.

unfortunately i cant really say how you could fix it, cus although its a stunning layout, i really cant see it relating to a kennel in any way whatsoever :(

i think for something like this you should go a bit more conventional, if this was your portfolio i would say thumbs up (apart from the text :( ) but i think you need to rethink the design more toward the subject.

ignoring the subject of the site, its a great design though :)
I don't know, I tried to make it like the last layout without the vector, but you have no idea how hard it is to get photos/drawings that I can use.
I have asked my dad to take them so we will see.
This can be for my portfolio or it will be the site...time will tell, and what my "clients" rule...lol :D
But thaks so much for the positive feed.
Regarding the font I assume your talking about the hippy one?
I experimented with the 5G's I have of fonts, but that one actually fit best. lol
:P :)

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Posted 11 November 2005 - 03:08 AM

Changed font and added "Irish Wolfhounds"....I think it looks better now..
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Posted 11 November 2005 - 08:32 AM

cool colors and nice layout!

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Posted 11 November 2005 - 08:44 AM

I agree with a few of the other posters.... fix the text and you will be styling. The graphics are awesome, just the font needs to match the awesomeness of the design!
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Posted 11 November 2005 - 10:21 AM

hobulus, on Nov 11 2005, 03:44 PM, said:

I agree with a few of the other posters.... fix the text and you will be styling. The graphics are awesome, just the font needs to match the awesomeness of the design!
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You have to name a font you would maby think would fit.
Or someone has to, because I don't get the problem with this one. lol ;) ;)

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Posted 11 November 2005 - 04:03 PM

I've seen alot better from you :)
I dont really like colours and I dont reckon they complement eachother atall.
Sorry :D

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Posted 11 November 2005 - 04:03 PM

well, I dont think the layout is appropriate for the site. I think a kennel site should look...i dunno...kennel-ie.

Try something more business-looking like this:

http://www.petsmart.com/ps/main.jsp


But the layout u made would be great for a design portfolio or something! :)

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Posted 11 November 2005 - 05:24 PM

wizdude, on Nov 11 2005, 11:03 PM, said:

well, I dont think the layout is appropriate for the site. I think a kennel site should look...i dunno...kennel-ie.

Try something more business-looking like this:

http://www.petsmart.com/ps/main.jsp


But the layout u made would be great for a design portfolio or something! B)
Wish is why I'm making it just that. I talked to my mom and she likes the "old book" look. Papyrus with drawings..:D
My other style. :D

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Posted 11 November 2005 - 07:24 PM

it looks allright, thought its a bit image heavy and room for content is limited

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Posted 11 November 2005 - 09:39 PM

UPDATE: I desided to have this as my portfolio, and therfore changed the name:

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So now it is better suited for it's perpus. <3





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