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I just wanted to see what you think of the scene im working on for a contest, its for abandond places:



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[BlueWednesday]

Nice like the window and door. You could make the stairs look like theyre made of stone and crumble the edges etc. Anyway GJ.

And hello again everyone.

[Donna]

Very nice but the staircase looks outta place to the rest of the image. Maybe break a railing or remove partial bits of the stairs. Pop a rat in the corner.

Other than than good luck hope you do well.

[Hoot]

Thanks I like the rat idea!

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[ThaBirdman]

Yea, i agree w/donna, the staricas is in too good shape for the rest of the image...and that chair looks a wee bit out of proportion, just too big i think compared to the door....but maybe its just me

nice work other way! the lighting, i think, will make or break this image, so good luck w/that!

[Stu]

it looks to me as if the handrail is seriously out of proportion. it looks way too small.

it all looks a bit cartoonish at the moment. but i really like it. will be interesting to see it rendered.

edit: oh yeh, the planks might look nicer if they were a bit smaller too, thinner i mean. and like the post below says try stagger them a bit

Edited by Stu, 09 December 2005 - 07:33 PM.

[SKETCHi]

Looking really nice so far. Love the detail on the door and window. The floor looks really nice too, but I would stagger the wooden planks. Most wood floor planks aren't butted up against one another like that.

Also, like everyone else said, the stairs seem too perfect and don't quite fit with the rest. Maybe add some broken bars to the banister, and add another banister to the right side (stage left) of the stairs.

But it's looking really nice, much better than I could hope to do heh.

[Silwolffe]

Wow, looks as if it's coming along nicely!

I agree with Stu about the guard-rails being out of proportion, maybe work with them a bit.

Other than that, everything looks like it will come together when the textures are applied, good work so far!

[slack3r08]

That's coming out pretty cool .. i agree with the proportions part on an earlier post the handrail looks kinda weird.. can't wait to see it with all the textures and rendered

[BeaverElfeater]

i agree with the stairs, i would make the stairs like this



not spiral but backless, so i could make some of them broken,etc and some railing broken

lookin good so far keep workin on it

[Tasha]

I like it, but here's a few things I reckon you should change. Obviously the stairs, and they've already been mentioned. I'd put a smashed in window in And then the table, vase and chair could do with some messing up. But otherwise I do really like it.

[Bryn]

Well all comments abpve are good + I think you should make walls look like they're decayign as they look too nice.

[Canen Art]

Very well done. These 3d pictures are so neat looking.

Best Regards,

Jason

[nicholaskang]

Add a few cobwebs

[Hoot]

thanks everyone updates soon!

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[g00se]

yeh everyting that every1 else sed,
and maybe add like some rafters on the ceiling breaking, or a hole in the ceiling...