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#1 slack3r08

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Posted 10 December 2005 - 07:15 AM

Hey, this is the first wallpaper i've ever done :huh: hope you like it
i never post anything cuz i'm never happy with my results hehe but with this it's different i really liked the outcome :D

Please i want your critiques!!! :)

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Edited by slack3r08, 10 December 2005 - 09:12 AM.


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Posted 11 December 2005 - 06:41 AM

I like it, nice background and nice wallpaper overall. Render looks real :(

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Posted 11 December 2005 - 07:06 AM

Looks good, It's good you made render focused.
Making your copyright small was good to cuz if it's big usually that tends to put people off it. :(

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Posted 13 December 2005 - 02:16 PM

Thanks for the feedback :P

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Posted 13 December 2005 - 03:09 PM

I like it a lot, good job!! Though personally I would like to see the text changed to go with the render's hair color more... but it looks great either way!

-Austen :P

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Posted 13 December 2005 - 09:10 PM

hmm well, i dont even know where to start to critique.
everything looks as it should.
Im adding it to my collection. Way cool for your first.

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Posted 13 December 2005 - 10:39 PM

View Postausten, on Dec 13 2005, 05:09 PM, said:

I like it a lot, good job!! Though personally I would like to see the text changed to go with the render's hair color more... but it looks great either way!

-Austen :)

hey thanks man .. about the text thing at first i wanted to make it like the original game logo or something like that .. but then i found out in some forum what font the used for it so i got it and started working on something on my own .. i ended up with what you see there


and Atomica::

Thanks for adding it to your collection :)!!

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Posted 15 December 2005 - 06:50 AM

It's pretty cool. Personally, I would've made the background darker so it's more of a contrast between the background and the character.

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Posted 16 December 2005 - 04:00 AM

look good the text just needs work





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