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#1 -Michael-

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Posted 30 December 2005 - 11:46 AM

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People tell me it's lacking something, I agree, but I have no idea what to add.

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Posted 30 December 2005 - 02:58 PM

i agree, it need some sort of line or a sharp objext u think :ph34r:

#3 Phazon Eater

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Posted 30 December 2005 - 05:39 PM

The blending on the left side of the stock could use some work. It also seems a bit too big for that sort of sig. Just make it smaller then add a simple border. Custom shapes may work on this sig too...

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Posted 30 December 2005 - 08:31 PM

The sides of the render are empty, theres nothing capturing the moment lol

#5 -Michael-

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Posted 31 December 2005 - 03:39 AM

I think the size just doesn't suit the style.

#6 Phazon Eater

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Posted 31 December 2005 - 02:58 PM

View Post-Michael-, on Dec 31 2005, 03:39 AM, said:

I think the size just doesn't suit the style.

Sounds like what I said. <_<

I'd like to see a smaller version of this sig...

#7 Bryn

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Posted 01 January 2006 - 01:57 PM

The cloudyness over her face doesnt flow well.
Needs more depth.
Maybe work on text a lil more.

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Posted 01 January 2006 - 02:56 PM

It needs a bit more depth and detail I think, not bad though

#9 digital47

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Posted 02 January 2006 - 02:10 AM

i personally think that a sword running horizontally behind the render would really set the piece off... give it a try... who knows huh?





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