People tell me it's lacking something, I agree, but I have no idea what to add.
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First strike
Started by -Michael-, Dec 30 2005 11:46 AM
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Posted 30 December 2005 - 11:46 AM
People tell me it's lacking something, I agree, but I have no idea what to add.
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Posted 30 December 2005 - 02:58 PM
i agree, it need some sort of line or a sharp objext u think 
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Posted 30 December 2005 - 05:39 PM
The blending on the left side of the stock could use some work. It also seems a bit too big for that sort of sig. Just make it smaller then add a simple border. Custom shapes may work on this sig too...
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Posted 30 December 2005 - 08:31 PM
The sides of the render are empty, theres nothing capturing the moment lol
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Posted 31 December 2005 - 03:39 AM
I think the size just doesn't suit the style.
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Posted 31 December 2005 - 02:58 PM
-Michael-, on Dec 31 2005, 03:39 AM, said:
I think the size just doesn't suit the style.
Sounds like what I said.
I'd like to see a smaller version of this sig...
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Posted 01 January 2006 - 01:57 PM
The cloudyness over her face doesnt flow well.
Needs more depth.
Maybe work on text a lil more.
Needs more depth.
Maybe work on text a lil more.
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Posted 01 January 2006 - 02:56 PM
It needs a bit more depth and detail I think, not bad though
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Posted 02 January 2006 - 02:10 AM
i personally think that a sword running horizontally behind the render would really set the piece off... give it a try... who knows huh?
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