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#1 RyJek

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Posted 24 January 2006 - 03:27 AM

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Posted 24 January 2006 - 02:38 PM

original but you need alot of work on depth and flow.

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Posted 24 January 2006 - 03:35 PM

Well I got a lot of work on everything imho.
Thanks a lot.

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Posted 24 January 2006 - 03:45 PM

Wow. That piece has a lot of good qualities, but sadly, I think it has a lot of 'bad' qualities as well. I love the render and the background, but the black 'fog' looks a bit too strong, especially the ones flying out from the main area at the center-right portion of the picture. It has a lot of black space as well at the bottom-left area, too much for me.

Overall, the render is awesome and the background! You did an awesome job on them, and the text fits in quite nicely. The black fog needs some fixxin up, and that's all I think will be needed for this to be a great piece IMO! Keep up the work.

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Posted 24 January 2006 - 06:09 PM

Well the part of the black fog ur reffering to wasn't ment to be blurry like a real fog or resemeble the one from the real life at all. It has more of a symbolic meaning and didn't want tu blur it.

Thanks a lot for the comment.

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Posted 28 January 2006 - 07:54 AM

i really like it mate, some good renders and good background.

keep up the good work

Matt





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