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#1 Rafe

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Posted 09 April 2006 - 07:31 PM

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Made in Bryce 5/PS CS
I made the render, my friend Bob did the actual rendering because my computer sucks, and I postworked.
First render in Bryce, looks decent.
http://img403.images...10/rake32ji.png
alternately: http://www.deviantar...ation/31581791/

Edited by Rafe, 09 April 2006 - 09:55 PM.


#2 Icedragon

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Posted 10 April 2006 - 12:56 AM

its alright i guess. Dont really like how you have solid black bg. it also looks to be just colored render though, you should try brushing the render. (if you did sorry cant see it) also have the render take up less space. to me it takes up too much space i think.

#3 Cephas

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Posted 10 April 2006 - 06:24 PM

I like the render and the colouring of it, but I'd say how you've put the ext and the bit of tech next to it really detracts from the overall image.

#4 KiNG`Joey

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Posted 10 April 2006 - 07:13 PM

I don't like how hard the lines are

#5 Bravi

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Posted 13 April 2006 - 10:38 AM

Personally, I think that the render is really smooth, but those colors, especially on the black bg, make the render really sharp and kinda dark.

#6 Atomica

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Posted 13 April 2006 - 10:49 AM

Its pretty blurry, and scratchy.





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