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Artwork Critique plz
Started by Dirk Black, May 12 2006 12:02 PM
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Posted 12 May 2006 - 12:02 PM
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Posted 12 May 2006 - 12:36 PM
Don't like the blurred effect on the text. The render and fire background looks good.
Edited by Jacorre, 12 May 2006 - 12:36 PM.
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Posted 12 May 2006 - 01:25 PM
It's good but few thigs..
Font sucks - sry mate..
where is all shadows? I assume that only light source is that "fire" in back?? Now it looks like that some one is holding flashlight front of that image.. hehe..
But it is good...
Font sucks - sry mate..
where is all shadows? I assume that only light source is that "fire" in back?? Now it looks like that some one is holding flashlight front of that image.. hehe..
But it is good...
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Posted 12 May 2006 - 01:42 PM
thx, I think you're right, the text sucked, so i got rid of it altogether..
as far as the lighting if you just have the backdrop create the lighting it doesnt illuminate the area very well, there are actually about 5 light sources in the render..
as far as the lighting if you just have the backdrop create the lighting it doesnt illuminate the area very well, there are actually about 5 light sources in the render..
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Posted 13 May 2006 - 05:37 PM
i think it is awesome... what program did you use... ofviously not PSP... i wish i could have the good programs...
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Posted 13 May 2006 - 07:58 PM
I didn't notice the text, but the image looks really neat. 
Keep up the great work.
Best Regards,
Jason
Keep up the great work.Best Regards,
Jason
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Posted 14 May 2006 - 06:54 AM
oreowake, on May 13 2006, 06:36 PM, said:
i think it is awesome... what program did you use... ofviously not PSP... i wish i could have the good programs...
Cinema4D I love it, its not that hard to learn either. I hear there are some 3d programs out there that are really cheap if not free, is it blender3d thats the free one? Shrug, check it out, hope this helps. and thanks for the critiques guys I appriciate it
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