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#1 SebLev

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Posted 21 May 2006 - 09:12 PM

heres the start of my site template tell me what you think... im working on the navigation right now and adding content...

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f220/lil...b/template5.jpg

#2 jamiecarter

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Posted 22 May 2006 - 10:26 AM

hi lilman, its looking good so far.. only thing is the thin black lines going blocky (i too dont know how to allevaite that..

theres something about the top picture with the blue models.. it just looks funny.. i dont know why maybe its the bg colour of the pic, maybe try a lighter grey?

This cud just be me being really fussy....

i like it so far just need the content ;)

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Posted 22 May 2006 - 10:57 AM

I like the concept, I hate that gradient ;)
Try making it smoother so it blends in with the rest of the design. If you could do that, it would by my taste improve a lot.
And try adding the content with the typography, that too does mean a lot to a site.
Good luck finishing this ;)

#4 SebLev

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Posted 22 May 2006 - 11:04 AM

thanks for all yoru replys and yeah i know about the blotchy grey strokes im still trying to find a way to avoid it but meh... and about the top picture ill try changing the line up and maybe add a lighter grey but ill put it more behind then right in the front so that it doesnt take all attention.....

Indigo: yeah i think i will take that gradient out lol i didnt know really if i should or not i kinda wanted too but i left it there for now.... but ill change that right away...

thanks alot for yoru comments

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Posted 22 May 2006 - 02:45 PM

hey man looks good but i would either make the blue models grayscale, take them out completely or change the red color cuz they dont mix very well





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