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[Flex-]

Hello guys well its me again, And im back with a new crazy red scheme template. Im currently working on my design portfollio so il have plenty of designs up throughtout the week including another new template im working on.
This is not the complete finished design as i need ad a few more stuff before placing in my portfollio.
Please comments and critics as im back using photoshop again(2nd week)

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[Jacorre]

I like the design and layout. I don't like the placement of the "Are you..18 or over?", "Accepting New Models", and "Contact Us Now" text.

[Clandestine]

looks good, just change the link font type

-Devyn

[Flex-]

Thank you, i have changed the '18 or over...' Content box and added some more colour ...a model jpeg.

As for links text i will change it to a more formal text thanks.

Any more comments?

[Indigo]

Layout in general is nice, but I don't like the typography at all.
"Justmodels" and "Interface the feeling relive" should be as much to the right as the "welcome"-text, and the there should be more spacing between "Interface the feeling" and "relive".
...But that's just my opinion.

[Flex-]

Thank you for that, regarding the 'relive' and text above, i spaced tha tlike that for style, but i see where you are coming from, i do need to heavily improve my text. Thank you il re go through it looking at that.

More critism or comments are welcome