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[coolaid]

about 10 hours workin on this. my first vector where i didn't skimp out on trying to vector a person. anyway, i want critique
http://www.deviantar...ation/33876992/

[Dirk Black]

wow, thats amazing, very good stuff, I'd like to see more

[Indigo]

I like it too, great shadows.
Btw - People should full view, I saw the preview and thought "I thougth coolaid was actually quite good", and now that I saw the full view, I still think you're qute good
I'd personally like a bit more detail and shadow on both hair and the hearth-thingy, else than that, it's nice

[coolaid]

thanks

im still working on vectoring hair, its really really... really hard.

[zBlade]

The right arm, hand, and eye are a bit messed up. The arm's bent too far in, the hand looks reversed, and the right eye is too big and bulged out for it's location.

However, it's very clean, well done, and I have no other complaints. The few proportion errors (which can be forgiven easily) I mentioned are pointless. Great job.

Edit: I take the hand one back. It's not reversed, just not shaded. I can't tell where the palm is and where the wrist is. My advice is to shade it a bit more.

Edited by zBlade, 28 May 2006 - 12:04 AM.

[coolaid]

ooooo your right, i just took a good look at the palm, i should've shaded it darker.

but believe it or not, the arm being bent in so much is actually like that in the real pick, i was actually thinking to myself "damn... this girls arm is pretty wierd, it's gonna look like a vector mistake" hehehe

[ecker00]

U are pro coolaid this is rly good job man ^^ but ur so right zBlade, did not c it before u said it GJ coolaid, GO ON