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#1 Nick

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Posted 12 June 2006 - 04:56 PM

I just made this layout the other day and I was wondering if it was any good. Please give me some feedback on what should be added and/or removed from the layout.

http://zenhelix.us.to

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#2 Matheus

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Posted 12 June 2006 - 08:58 PM

That's what I get when I try to acess your website:

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The page isn't redirecting properly

Firefox has detected that the server is redirecting the request for this address in a way that will never complete.

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#3 Nick

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Posted 12 June 2006 - 09:10 PM

Hmm, it works fine for me...

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Posted 12 June 2006 - 09:18 PM

View PostNick, on Jun 12 2006, 05:55 PM, said:

I just made this layout the other day and I was wondering if it was any good. Please give me some feedback on what should be added and/or removed from the layout.

http://zenhelix.us.to

Thanks!
Nick


Next time ask before you help yourself to my images... http://zenhelix.us.to/wp-content/themes/ze.../4templates.gif I made that banner specifically for P2L and asked permission from 4t to do so.

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#5 Nick

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Posted 12 June 2006 - 10:06 PM

Uhh, I didn't steal that from you. I copied the images from one of the banners on 4templates site to make them then added some text to it. But if you would like to take it down I will... I have the psd on my computer if you would like to see it.

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Posted 12 June 2006 - 10:35 PM

nice site, navigation seems simple, and I like the tutorial excerpts on the front page, nice touch.. if you had c4d tuts I'd be all over your site

#7 Nick

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Posted 12 June 2006 - 10:51 PM

Well, I don't have c4d, but I've been trying to get my hands on it for a while now. Maybe I'll get it and learn enough to make some tuts for it :huh:

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Posted 13 June 2006 - 06:36 PM

hmm, now the page is working here

I think it's a nice design, well coded and designed
But I think that the text needs a bit more contrast
also, I recomend the use of a color in the header, and not that boring grey :biggrin:

but it's ok in general, very nice job





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