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#1 wanda

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Posted 13 June 2006 - 06:17 AM

Hi,

i'm quite new here and i think this is one of my first post but here goes. I just finished my new website aind would like som feedback. It is very clean and simple but that was also what i wanted.

I'm sorry my english is not that good but i am from Denmark, Europe.

Check it out! :mellow:

http://www.prolab-design.dk/

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Posted 13 June 2006 - 06:29 AM

I really do not like the fonts you used, especially in the navigation, the rest is good, maybe could use a litle more colour, like a logo or anything up the top. Good work.

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Posted 13 June 2006 - 09:07 AM

Bring the layout up more. There's too much space at the top I think. It's a small confined space for the content yet I had to scroll down to actually see it all. Other than that it's nice.

Edited by Jacorre, 13 June 2006 - 09:08 AM.


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Posted 13 June 2006 - 06:47 PM

View PostJacorre, on Jun 13 2006, 02:07 PM, said:

Bring the layout up more. There's too much space at the top I think. It's a small confined space for the content yet I had to scroll down to actually see it all. Other than that it's nice.

exaclty what I noticed too

wanda, you should try to make a header for your page too, yours is little and only contains text
anyway: verynice design and clean looking, I liked the backgorud you used, very good choice

#5 wanda

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Posted 14 June 2006 - 04:10 AM

Thanks everyone for the nice comments! :P

I know there isent alot of graphic but i am working on it. I am trying to get a little life to the site, but i think it is difficult when it is allready made.

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Posted 14 June 2006 - 11:11 AM

Alot of spelling mistakes in the content. Proof read is your best bet.

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Posted 14 June 2006 - 09:24 PM

make the font more visible, in flash 8 you have the possibilty to anti-alias it for readibility, which is really helpful

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Posted 14 June 2006 - 11:17 PM

View PostNike, on Jun 14 2006, 04:10 PM, said:

Alot of spelling mistakes in the content. Proof read is your best bet.

well, this was explained already:

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I'm sorry my english is not that good but i am from Denmark, Europe.

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make the font more visible, in flash 8 you have the possibilty to anti-alias it for readibility

isn't that for fonts with AA? the font wanda used is wihtout it
I think if needs to be more visible, a little bit larger size would solve the problem :P

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Posted 15 June 2006 - 02:39 PM

Cant any font be antialiased? I made my windows do it for everything on my screen, I'm sure Flash can do the same.

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Posted 15 June 2006 - 04:05 PM

yep every font can be anti-aliased, some works well, some less..

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Posted 16 June 2006 - 05:28 AM

View Postfunkysoul, on Jun 14 2006, 09:24 PM, said:

make the font more visible, in flash 8 you have the possibilty to anti-alias it for readibility, which is really helpful

The font i am using, Verdana is anti-aliased in flash. I just think its because of the samll size that it is hard to read. I am using 1600 * 1200 and i dont have any problems reading the font.

Maybe a screen shot would help ^_^

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Posted 16 June 2006 - 04:55 PM

In a recent poll i done with my members and clients, there top web hates are:

Music in the background,
Pop ups,

and splash pages.


Music being the worse.

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Posted 17 June 2006 - 05:17 AM

if someone doesn't want music, he can switch it off... ^_^
for what do you have controls.....

don't have to mention that some of the best awarded websites have music players and athmo music in the background.......

Edited by funkysoul, 17 June 2006 - 05:17 AM.


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Posted 17 June 2006 - 06:01 AM

Doesnt mean they sell as much as they could, For instants when orange first released there futures bright the futures orange campaigne, they had adverts of just an orange box.. They won awards for it.. But did half the people know what the company was? or even sold..


Nope.


Different concept same prinicple, Music for most is a turn off. Sounds on the otherhand arnt, i.e your button sounds and roll over image noises that sort of stuff.


Plus the younger market mostly play music while they are on the internet, and most young people have it alot louder than some ^_^ if i were playing my music and heard that playing, id press the X faster than i pressed enter.

Edited by Danny, 17 June 2006 - 06:02 AM.


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Posted 17 June 2006 - 10:38 AM

oh yeh right.. button sounds are completely a NO GO, most of the people don't know how to implement sound in a website, nevertheless, I defend my position that sound is a nice "supplement". (if you know how to implement it)





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