I finally finished the site after putting it off for a descent amount of time. Link is below:
http://shortkid422.com/
Any comments/suggestions/flaming(not really)/questions/concerns, etc... are greatly appreciated. Thanks!
*Note: images within the text may be added shortly depending on upcoming work and travel.
Please Critique ShortkidDesign
Started by shortkid422, Jun 13 2006 05:01 PM
4 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 13 June 2006 - 05:01 PM
#2
Posted 13 June 2006 - 06:21 PM
You should have an active state for the navigation so users know where they are.
Also the text is much easier to read if you make it bigger one notch.
You also failed XTHML validation on two of the pages (23 errors on the contact page - http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%...%2Fcontact.php) and one on another (forget which) http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%...com%2Fabout.php
Also the text is much easier to read if you make it bigger one notch.
You also failed XTHML validation on two of the pages (23 errors on the contact page - http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%...%2Fcontact.php) and one on another (forget which) http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%...com%2Fabout.php
Edited by c-c-C-C-UNIT, 13 June 2006 - 06:26 PM.
#3
Posted 13 June 2006 - 06:32 PM
good website
well coded, no graphic problems
If I were you, I would take the reflection of the text and make it more translucid (transparency about 30%), to make it look like a real reflection
well coded, no graphic problems
If I were you, I would take the reflection of the text and make it more translucid (transparency about 30%), to make it look like a real reflection
#4
Posted 13 June 2006 - 07:05 PM
Simple, sleek.
I likey.
Yea, I think the reflection would look better if you lowered the opacity, too.
I likey.
Yea, I think the reflection would look better if you lowered the opacity, too.
Edited by Wolfe, 13 June 2006 - 07:06 PM.
#5
Posted 13 June 2006 - 07:29 PM
Thanks a million c-c-C-C-UNIT! It was getting invalidated because PHP added a hidden form field to pass the PHPSESSID, but puts it directly after the <form> field, invalidating it because it isn't contained (putting the entire form in a <div> doesn't work).
For anyone with this obscure problem, put this in the beginning of the code:
And put this within the contained form:
As for the opacity and the active state, I'll have that done very soon, but those are just small things now that the contact page is finally done.
Keep the suggetsions coming, I love em!
For anyone with this obscure problem, put this in the beginning of the code:
ini_set("arg_separator.output", "&");
ini_set("url_rewriter.tags", "a=href,area=href,frame=src,input=src");
And put this within the contained form:
<input type="hidden" name="PHPSESSID" value="<?php echo session_id(); ?>" />
As for the opacity and the active state, I'll have that done very soon, but those are just small things now that the contact page is finally done.
Keep the suggetsions coming, I love em!
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