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#1 xPoiSoNx

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Posted 17 June 2006 - 09:37 AM

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I did this not to long ago and really liked the outcome. Hope you will too!

#2 -Michael-

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Posted 17 June 2006 - 12:11 PM

It looks prety cool the render is nice and smooth, but the flow of the sig is a little off, it's that light in the middle, it's hard for me to explain, but basically, the light needs to go the same direction as the render.

#3 Diastro14

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Posted 17 June 2006 - 03:09 PM

What the above poster said, and it could also use a better border,
but overall, I like it! 7,5/10!

#4 Bryn

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Posted 17 June 2006 - 06:05 PM

Like alot, smooth vector gradient render and nice colours.
Maybe dim down central lighting afterwards using a fade, also maybe playh around with the text a little and move it into different places etc... because atm i don't think it suits that well.

#5 Zaennon_

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Posted 21 June 2006 - 04:54 PM

i actuallt don't agree with the others, i love, it's a straight 10/10!
keep it up :)

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Posted 21 June 2006 - 05:35 PM

love it 10/10

#7 Ruxias

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Posted 26 June 2006 - 08:59 PM

As said before, nice render. Just try to make it less bright and add more "flow," if that is the proper term. I like how it is coming along as of yet!





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