It hasnt been coded yet or anything so its still a wrok in progress. But tell me what you guys think about the overall design and the flash itself.
http://joeburton.kjbets.com/flash
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My New Flash Design
Started by ap0c01yp5, Jun 20 2006 09:32 AM
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Posted 20 June 2006 - 09:32 AM
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Posted 20 June 2006 - 09:52 AM
It's alright. Seems kinda plain and dull though. You should definitely add something to the text in the banner to make it more exciting.
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Posted 20 June 2006 - 11:42 AM
as you are makking it in flash, I sugest you to make it smother, you can add round corners, use diferent fonts for the nav bar. gradients on the backgrounds, animated buttons.
also, your image at the right is without anti-aliased (pixelated).
and add more color to it
also, your image at the right is without anti-aliased (pixelated).
and add more color to it
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Posted 20 June 2006 - 01:06 PM
It's a very simple layout. I would suggest adding contrast between the header font and navigation font. Try using a different font for the navigation. The logo is very choppy, smooth it out.
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Posted 20 June 2006 - 07:03 PM
You can do one thing ap0c01yp5, that is you make a caption or something like that below or beside the title so that visitors can understand you and your site clearly. And also make the font of the bottons something simpler like Comic Sans etc, because it is somewhat confusing. If you like this suggestion please reply me. Bye!
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Posted 20 June 2006 - 10:52 PM
mihir, on Jun 21 2006, 12:02 AM, said:
You can do one thing ap0c01yp5, that is you make a caption or something like that below or beside the title so that visitors can understand you and your site clearly. And also make the font of the bottons something simpler like Comic Sans etc, because it is somewhat confusing. If you like this suggestion please reply me. Bye!
Yeah your right. Ive gotten plenty of people saying my font is hard to read. Thanks for the suggestion
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