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#1 Spyder

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Posted 22 June 2006 - 08:04 AM

Here i made a quick one, i told you i was bad but its meant to be overwhelming so i know its quite bright with the spider but i want truethfull critique please and ways too improve my style, because I can't request them forever.
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Posted 22 June 2006 - 09:51 AM

looks good, kinda looks like maybe u was going for an over exposed look? but ur brights are to sharp so it just doesnt come off overwhelming like u want. I like it thought

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Posted 22 June 2006 - 12:29 PM

Thank you for your critique, I will take this in mind for future creations.

This is why i like pixel2life, its the best way too learn photoshop through other people :)

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Posted 22 June 2006 - 12:36 PM

i think its pretty good. maybe make it smaller?

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Posted 23 June 2006 - 08:03 AM

i think its very nice, but its way too big and wide...
about the text, maybe u want to make it bigger or something, it took me like 4 looks to notice the text.
but i like it
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Posted 26 June 2006 - 01:04 PM

ty the background is actually a forest that i used cut out on to giv a vectorish feel, and i recoulered it maybe too bright, i will try and optimize it soon.

TY all you are helping me on my way too becoming an knowledgable graphic designer ;)

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Posted 26 June 2006 - 08:56 PM

Looking good so far, but I would recommend adding some type of simple border for that kind of a sig. Also, try decreasing the contrast a bit and brightening it up if you are going for an "overexposed" look, as esem said.

Keep at it...





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