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#21 Danny

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Posted 04 July 2006 - 05:55 PM

Which our company are prepared to produce...


Im pretty sure its meant to be "is"


Also, remove the flash page. Its a huge turn off for many users. Users want quick and easy access to websites, Hense the ever increasing internetconnection speeds. They don't want to waste time entering a site via two pages, one that poses no benefit and another that contains the content.

The popup should open in "_blank". If you have high security settings (which some potential customers may have) it doesnt open at all.

The website isnt accessible to users with small screens, nor to those that dont have the required plugins, maybe offer alternatives, i.e Html or Css only verions.

The font is quite small maybe have alternatives for visually impaired customers (as the browser option to increase it isnt avaliable).

The blurr on the arrows needs to be removed, its irritating and pointless since most of your potential users cant see it due to the fact they dont have the manditory screensize to view the entire site.


Considering your offering a paid for service, with no clear examples of your work other than a site thats not fully functional id say the site was a shambles. Your services should so small thumb nails of example products and services that can be clicked on to view a more detailed breakdown.

The white space may look spiffy and cool to you but your not selling your services to your self, your trying to sell your services to people you have never met nor know what they like, due to that most websites play on basic and common likes such as basic use of colour, easy navigation and user friendlyness. Non of which you've taken into account.

Sure your website is Stylish but its not practical, functional or userfriendly.

A website can be broken down into 5 basic groups.
Purpose - Does it serve its purpose? Does it meet requirements? is it feasible?
Design - does it reflect well on the company.
Functionality - does it work? does it work to its full potential?
user friendlyness - easy to navigate? clear content that flows?
Cost - is it worth it?

Youve only really covered 20% of what your site can or should do.

Purpose - Your site doesnt serve its purpose as a user can't see what you have offered to prior clients and can only read what you claim to offer. Screenshots, links and previews would be an easy and simple but effective fix.

Design - Complete and utter waste of the screenspace, you need to make it avaliable to all or at least the 3 main screen sizes. You also need to increase the download speed, you might have a fast connection but some customers might not. i have a 2mb connection and it took me at least 20-30+ to download, Many people still have 56k..

Functionality - The popup needs to be removed, with cetain browser and network router settings it doesnt apear at all, the site also requires plugins for the flash, some users may not have these pre download which means it adds further downloading time to your site, and they might think well its not worth it and leave. Offer alternatives like Html or Css only.

User friendlyness - clearly ignored, having a mandatory screensize is a design mistake you will deffinetly regret. Make it so it either expands or collapses to certain screensizes. Or at the very least offer scrollbars

Cost - only you can be the judge of that.


Well you certaintly have the wow factor, but not in the good way. Its more like "wow, i wont be visiting them any time soon"


Other than that, fairly good use of clear and standard colours. It would be good as one of those free to download flash sites, not as a company website.


Edit: Ok after reading all the reviews and what not, the samples of your work need to be moved to a more obvious place. I didn't guess to click on your photos, i went straight to the navigation menu. Also i dont get why your mugs are on the home page, is it a blog or a company website? because i couldn't careless who you are i'd want to know that im getting what i pay for. maybe place the samples there rather than your portrates. Or fade them into the background and place the samples above.

Edited by Danny, 04 July 2006 - 06:05 PM.


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Posted 05 July 2006 - 05:41 AM

I really like the funky colours you've used, and the thing you've done with your photos is cool as well. The transition animations are a bit slow for my taste but it's great overall.

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Posted 05 July 2006 - 11:39 AM

Danny,

When I asked for criticism I didnt ask for a page long essay.

You have made good points about the site but try narrowing the post down next time. Try using bullet points =)

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Posted 05 July 2006 - 11:48 AM

You asked for critique and that is one of the more extensive critique posts I have seen in a large time. You should be happy that Danny took his time writing this for you.

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Posted 05 July 2006 - 12:21 PM

;) its ok i felt the same when Donna made some comments on my website, funny enough all the changes made by members and friends have all been implemented. Im also a sour grape when things dont go my way :D

As long as you get what you need from the post then it was worth my while

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Posted 05 July 2006 - 12:35 PM

;) its ok i felt the same when Donna made some comments on my website, funny enough all the changes made by members and friends have all been implemented. Im also a sour grape when things dont go my way :D

As long as you get what you need from the post then it was worth my while



Why because myself and a few others saw ads and no content, I hardly find that a critical comment that's just plain truth.

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MAdEinUK1 you have asked members for critique so please take into consideration what people are telling you, look forward to the changes, everything looks the same to me atm.

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Posted 05 July 2006 - 01:07 PM

Why because myself and a few others saw ads and no content, I hardly find that a critical comment that's just plain truth.



I wasnt complaining, i was just saying that when you first made the comments i was reluctent to change them but then i realised that fresh eyes were better. If you havent noticed i wasnt complaining. Also the changes have been made and i said thank you..

Gee. ;)

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Posted 05 July 2006 - 01:49 PM

look forward to the changes, everything looks the same to me atm.


I know sorry, Im having trouble with loading the portfolio swfs into the main movie.




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