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#1 d2Squared

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Posted 02 July 2006 - 06:38 PM

i was bored one night, so decided to make a header in Photoshop cs2, for ppl who want to make photoshop tutorials website
so thats what i got

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should i make a tutorial bout this? and ill see if i can inclulde some feeback here.

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Posted 02 July 2006 - 06:41 PM

Lower the opacity on the scanlines and you got a sick as hell banner, make the logo bigger though.

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Posted 02 July 2006 - 06:47 PM

k, thanks for the comment, i will lower it. thanks for telling, didnt notice that

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Posted 05 July 2006 - 12:22 PM

come on, no more feedback?

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Posted 05 July 2006 - 01:40 PM

Feedback wanted, feedback you will get ;)

The logo is somewhat cheap and not very personalized as a logo shall be and consist only of badly made gradients and glow, it doesn't look very good.

I'd advise you to look over the layers and place the white shape below the logo and below the scanlines. Also lower the opacity a bit on it so it makes it more of a nice thing, same with scanlines.

The text on the bottom is just bad I don't like that at all.

Overall I think it would need plently of work to make it flow into a more pro look, because this look (nothing personal) looks under what you call noobish.

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Posted 06 July 2006 - 10:42 AM

by the way, the logo part is not for me to make, its supposed to be ur personal logo, one u make by yourselve.
second, the opacity of the scan lines are alrdy fixed, and it excactly what the other guy told me.,
the rest, ill take that into consideration and dont be very harsh, "because this look (nothing personal) looks under what you call noobish."

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Posted 07 July 2006 - 04:24 AM

Aer you telling me to not be so harsh about it... you did want critique and you got it and then deal with it. I told you what I thought.

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Posted 07 July 2006 - 07:00 AM

nice desing ... its clean and eye catchy.. keep it up..

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Posted 09 July 2006 - 03:56 AM

I think you could make the text on the bottom-left better by removing the dropshadow and adding a 1px (#777da1) stroke.

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Posted 11 July 2006 - 03:49 AM

k
thanks for the feedback

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Posted 13 July 2006 - 03:59 AM

Reminds me of a cheap banner you get free with free website templates hehe. I dont really like it.. the whole tech border style you have tried going for doesnt fit the banner, and another thing.. how comes theres a 2 - 3px border line round the top and bottom edges and not the sides? You need to totally rethink this idea pal.

Nice attempt.. I hope you dont plan on selling this :angry:

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Posted 13 July 2006 - 06:24 AM

lol, no selling
i respect ur opinion
thanks anyway

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Posted 14 July 2006 - 01:05 PM

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QUOTE(Erik B @ Jul 5 2006, 01:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Feedback wanted, feedback you will get :)

The logo is somewhat cheap and not very personalized as a logo shall be and consist only of badly made gradients and glow, it doesn't look very good.

I'd advise you to look over the layers and place the white shape below the logo and below the scanlines. Also lower the opacity a bit on it so it makes it more of a nice thing, same with scanlines.

The text on the bottom is just bad I don't like that at all.

Overall I think it would need plently of work to make it flow into a more pro look, because this look (nothing personal) looks under what you call noobish.
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I agree with him. Also, there doesnt seem to be any depth in this piece.
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