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#1 Hit3k

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Posted 11 July 2006 - 02:17 AM

Yo.. just did this planet took me about an hour cause i had to decide on some things.. Its my second planet ever so dont be too harsh :D
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Posted 11 July 2006 - 02:54 AM

nice but are the sides suppose to glow?

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Posted 11 July 2006 - 03:33 AM

Sides of what the planet? yep they are I tried getting rid of the circles from the light but I havnt figured it out yet

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Posted 11 July 2006 - 04:50 AM

It looks more like an orb than a planet, one of orb tutorials without the gloss.

The outer glow is too strong and expands too far. I'd keep working on it mate, it wil be great in no time :D

#5 Hit3k

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Posted 11 July 2006 - 05:39 AM

Thanks for your opinion mate i'm still learning how to apply textures and get the filters right :D

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Posted 11 July 2006 - 08:29 AM

yeah slowy u will get beter.. nice job..

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Posted 11 July 2006 - 11:22 AM

good start, but need more work on it
don't add a lens flare, it ruins it hehe

tip: use 2x distort>shearize 100%, if you do it once it won't look like a planet





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