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#1 Power

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Posted 15 July 2006 - 02:16 AM

I'm pretty happy with how this one turned out, better than I expected. This one mainly focus on the nebula and the starfield. Let me know what you think. :blush:

Far Away III: http://www.deviantar...ation/36336662/

Edited by Power, 15 July 2006 - 01:20 PM.


#2 Spyder

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Posted 15 July 2006 - 03:04 AM

I love it, the red firey background is so surreal and its just WOW factor, guess who won my new desktop bg award :blush:, and your prize is a date with keira knightley, just don't mention my name when you find her.

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Posted 15 July 2006 - 01:15 PM

Lol! :)

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Posted 17 July 2006 - 06:07 AM

Well I see you've made another one :)
Fair to say that you've improved much since Far Away I, GJ :D

Just a few little things;
- The little stars are a bit too blurry
- The (big) stars on the nebula need to be a bit brighter
- The blueish planet seems a bit misplaced

Again, I like your planets' textures (good depth :D ), you did a nice job on the nebula (as you said on your DA, waay better than Far Away I (lol)) and the colours seem to work well...

Or in short: Very nice :D

PS. maybe you should try to be a bit more creative with your titles :tiphat:

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Posted 17 July 2006 - 03:32 PM

Hmm.. you still think the starfield is blurry? Ionno... I think that's the clearest I can get them to be. Now that you mention it, the stars on the nebula does look a bit dark. Lol... I just place the blueish planet randomly... Indeed, WAY better.

Yeah, I'm starting to hate the title too, lol... I'm thinking of ending this series pretty soon.

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Posted 17 July 2006 - 05:52 PM

I don't think the whole starfield is blurry, just the tiny stars, the ones that are further awayyyy :> Me go sleepy now, me tired (*-*")

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Posted 17 July 2006 - 09:37 PM

wow, what texture did you used?
the planet and nebula are very good
but the stars aren't so good, they are too grey and there are too much
also, they're blury

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Posted 17 July 2006 - 10:04 PM

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I don't think the whole starfield is blurry, just the tiny stars, the ones that are further awayyyy :> Me go sleepy now, me tired (*-*")

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wow, what texture did you used?
the planet and nebula are very good
but the stars aren't so good, they are too grey and there are too much
also, they're blury

I made the texture myself from various photos of the ground/wall/etc... Hmm... I don't know... the stars look green to me, maybe it's not green enough, lol. I see what you guys mean now with the blurry stars after staring at the pic for a while.

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Posted 18 July 2006 - 06:06 AM

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I see what you guys mean now with the blurry stars after staring at the pic for a while.

Huray! ^_^ :P

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Posted 18 July 2006 - 06:35 AM

Thats great! Lovley work :P I can't describe it in my own words, its just... crisp and amazing haha. ^_^

#11 Power

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Posted 20 July 2006 - 04:34 AM

Lol! Thanks.

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Posted 22 July 2006 - 10:48 AM

Nice job man. Really clean, I can see where other's are going about the stars being to blurry though. I don't think if affects the overall appearance that much though. Nice job, again.





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