Posted 03 August 2006 - 11:20 PM
I like it, but i think with those two elements to the right you should converge them or make them more seamless with the rest of the elements, preferably the bottom elements. Right now it looks like the main element is the top left, and then the 2nd and 3rd are the right elements.
Anyway, try to seamlessly link those with the background, so they are not floating so much. Another way you might try to do that it to repeat them in different sixes and opacities around them. To me they are nice looking, but do not contribute to the main element.