3 replies to this topic

[Matt L]

I've written a couple of songs. I wrote these when I was feeling pretty low so sorry if they're a bit depressing or whatever.

Quote

Verse 1
You never know who could like you,
I’m dead inside - I’m feeling blue,
The way you always make me feel,
You ne-ver know

Chorus
Open your eyes, open your heart,
Just let your love play the part,
Your love let’s my blood to flow,
And you’d ne-ver know

Verse 2
Another day, another lie
I know I’m right, this is my life
So I’ll stay, broken, alone
You’re all I want, you’d never know

Bridge
So anaemic…
So lonely…
So seduced…
So beautiful…

Chorus x2

Bridge

And

Quote

Verse 1
A burning in my heart,
Deep down inside,
I stop to remember
Every time you lied.

A skip in my heart,
Every time you’re near,
Stop with the games,
You’ve made it clear.


Chorus x2
Everything you said,
I’ll never forget it,
It’s all running through my head,
And it’s like you don’t even know me.


Verse 2
A hole in my heart,
That won’t grow back.
I’ve been trying to tell you,
But then the anxiety attacks.

You’re drowning my heart,
You’ve thrown it away.
Ignoring me constantly,
Sending me into dismay.


Bridge x3
Just give me a reason,
For this emotional treason

Opinions. And sorry if this is the wrong forum. I couldn't find anywhere else to put them

[Dale71]

There alright, there both pretty similar, Be good if you could record it and upload it so we get the ryhtm etc.

[Matt L]

I'm trying to get the rhythm at the moment. I'm finding it quite hard.

[Dale71]

I always find if I'm writing a song or somthing to make the rythm and the words at the same time :-/ Makes it alot easyier, Bit too late for that though