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[Art] LoFe F430 - finished


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#1 Xemurai

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Posted 09 September 2006 - 09:16 AM

Hey all ;) this is my first time I coloured one of my drawings in Photoshop :$ please be kind :)

http://www.deviantar...ation/39511138/

c&c is very welcome

Edited by Xemurai, 09 September 2006 - 09:19 AM.


#2 ChrisGilmore

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Posted 09 September 2006 - 11:10 AM

That's really nice, I like the colour. Really detailed and I like it on the whole.

Improvements

Too much shine at the front (the white stuff) It's nice and effective but there's a bit too much.
The registration plate is non-existant.

Nothing much else really. 9.3/10

How long did it take you?

#3 Xemurai

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Posted 09 September 2006 - 11:38 AM

The colouring took me about 5 or 6 hours, the drawing itself like 2 hours :)

Thanks btw. :(

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Posted 09 September 2006 - 02:27 PM

like chris said maybe just tone down the shine at the front but otherwise very nice work! :blink:

Edited by sik of it, 09 September 2006 - 02:27 PM.


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Posted 10 September 2006 - 05:26 AM

woah, very nice colouring, althought reduce white shine at front a lil :)

#6 Xemurai

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Posted 10 September 2006 - 12:37 PM

**UPDATE**

I removed the red, so it still looks like a drawing. Traced everything better now, cleaned up the whole thing, improved the shadows etc. (H)

Let me know what you think of it! And press refresh if it doesn't shows up

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Posted 10 September 2006 - 01:54 PM

Ye, that looks a lot cleaner and less messier now. Well Done ! ;)

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Posted 10 September 2006 - 02:49 PM

Thanks man ;) apreciate it

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 03:31 PM

Thats way better. Really clean and great shading. Keep up the great work! :P





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