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#1 z3r0k00l

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Posted 11 September 2006 - 02:43 PM

http://www.deviantar...ation/39630689/

constructive crytisism welcomed..

im not nearly as good as id like to be. im still learning how to do the mix.

so any tips are welcomed

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#2 d2Squared

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Posted 11 September 2006 - 02:55 PM

It awsome man! I like it alot
Good job

#3 z3r0k00l

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Posted 11 September 2006 - 03:58 PM

thanks dude. i love ur website btw. really neat!

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 08:44 AM

nice, although the text could do with some work, try a thinner more crisp font with no blending options.

#5 z3r0k00l

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 01:52 PM

View PostBryn, on Sep 12 2006, 03:44 PM, said:

nice, although the text could do with some work, try a thinner more crisp font with no blending options.


Thanks for the suggestion dude, will definitely take it into consideration ;)

#6 chaoslight

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 01:54 PM

nice job dude :D ;)

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 02:35 PM

Wow niceness, loving the colours, the text is a bit shabby though but everythign else 9/10 :P

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 03:38 PM

I love the abstract but I dont like the clouds you added. Although obviously that is just my opinion so don't worry. Good work!

#9 z3r0k00l

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Posted 13 September 2006 - 05:15 AM

thank you, im working on another one as we speak. :blink:

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 01:19 AM

Nice job, I like the colors, text could use a little work though.

Good job :rolleyes:

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 09:13 PM

Thats cool and I like the colors, although the concept has been played out a million times :D as long as you enjoy it, and it does look good just not my style ;)

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 09:16 PM

I like it, it turned out very well. Very nice colors.

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