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#1 z__FB

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Posted 17 September 2006 - 08:20 AM

What do you guys think of my site ?


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Posted 17 September 2006 - 08:34 AM

nice concept tho the colours are a little too dull and the text in the block headers is too dark n makes it hard to read

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Posted 17 September 2006 - 09:23 AM

Titles are too hard to read because of their lack of contrast in color.

I read the entire front page, and I still don't know what your site is for or about... Unless your target audience is Ms. Cleo, you should let the visitor know what your site is for.

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Posted 17 September 2006 - 12:31 PM

youre content boxes are a bit bland u might want to add somethign to liven them up. also you have arial (or something like it) for your titles, but you use times new roman... imo stick with arial for the entire thing

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Posted 17 September 2006 - 01:14 PM

put the site name in the header and the login text is kinda dark same with the other title text.

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Posted 17 September 2006 - 09:09 PM

almost full image based, you need to learn how to slice or make a CSS layout. your nav does not have even a rollover on it. Time to forget photoshop and image ready and try learning CSS and HTML.

the banner is quite nice, but I don't see the title of the website on it

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Posted 18 September 2006 - 12:18 PM

eh lol

i suck with coding so i'd rather not even try and whats a rollover ?

#8 z__FB

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Posted 19 September 2006 - 12:25 PM

o thnx, i made a nice site layout what u guys think ?

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Posted 19 September 2006 - 01:42 PM

Looks nice.. how its been coded sucks.. Sorry ;)

Check out Dan's guide : http://www.slicingguide.com/

Try to make the site more CSS Based.

Very bland at the moment and looks all out of place in FF..

sorry.. Just check out Dan's guide and retry later :blink:

Peace ;)

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Posted 19 September 2006 - 01:56 PM

umm, somehting in your site doesnt seem to work. I like the banner, but you seriously need to take that Log in Box Away! it destroys the whole banner. umm font... not good, make something different than that.
I am sorry, but to be honest, I am not really liking your site, sorry. maybe try a differnet layout?

#11 z__FB

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Posted 19 September 2006 - 03:39 PM

will do :)

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 03:28 AM

It's alright. I'm not a big fan of it. Your image work is nice, but I don't like your font. Also, standard blue links don't suit, and a lot of your boxes are out of alignment. Infact, there are quite a few little mistakes like that:

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Also, I don't like how every page is pretty much the forum except the news and contact; which for no reason opens in a new window that's all whitespace apart from three short lines of text.

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 12:20 PM

ye when i open it on my comp those lines dont come up but when i open it on the internet they do, could u help me and tell me y ?, and how do u change the texT?

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 02:58 PM

You've built that whole site, and can't change text style?

Google 'HTML Tutorials'.

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 03:29 PM

argh.. needs CSS.. Seriously. Its a nice concept, but the lack of CSS ruins it..





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