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Is there anything i need to change...

Started by Davey, Sep 20 2006 03:57 PM

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#1 Davey

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 03:57 PM

Is there anything i need to change in the design below... the site will b a service for making websites for people. i know it isn't very descriptive of wot the site is about as it stands but once i replace the text with real text that will all be sorted...

i'm looking for constructive criticism as well as comments so if u have any input feel free to tell me...

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#2 Matheus

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 04:52 PM

1- contrast: your website has too bright colors and gets really hard to read.
2- The website seems to be a business enterprise one, not a studio or something like that:
3- you should use anti-alias for your graphics, they are all pixelated.
4- the 01, 02,03 thing is something very useless. It's a web2.0 thing and it's not very cool

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#3 Davey

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 05:04 PM

anti-alias is always enabled except for on body text... nothin i could do for the corners... it is going to be for business... providing a web design service, as for the 01, 02 thing, i know they looks daft but it looks too plain with nothing there, i'll probly make some kind of icon 2moro relating to the content...

my main aim was somethin to design somethin that looks professional but not totally boring... but yea, the 01, 02 things are gonna b scrapped...

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#4 Illinifan91

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 07:55 PM

make the blue a little darker and make the logo look better.

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#5 Davey

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 01:51 AM

fusionmanx, on Sep 21 2006, 01:54 AM, said:

make the blue a little darker and make the logo look better.

yea, i thought the blue could do with being a little darker but couldn't get it how i wanted lol... will give it another try...

wot logo?

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#6 Programmers

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 04:57 AM

I like it. I don't have an critasism or anything decent to say. It's good, but it's not amazing.

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#7 jamiecarter

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 07:42 AM

i think the cyan colour needs changing, it distracts my eye and makes the grey text underneath hard to read. If you edit it to a more subtle colour it will look very appealing.

I love the layout, well done man

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#8 Rory

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 06:31 PM

Header needs to be darker and the text needs to be darker as well. Clean look though