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#1 snicket

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 06:51 PM

Hey, what do you think of my site

http://www.hldesigns.org/index.php

Comments plzz

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#2 ch4rlie

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 06:56 PM

not really liking the colors too much.. that green and pink or purple in the logo are hard to see. some of your little peeled off stickers are hard to read also especially the ones with the feathers in them. kinda looks like the shape of pixel2life a bit which isnt a bad thing casue everyone loves p2l!!!

#3 mattyK

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 07:13 PM

I quite like it... I like your light yet well incorporated use of little flares... I don't really like the purple much, and maybe lighten up the content colour a bit...

Otherwise pretty good.

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 07:30 PM

The colors are a bit strange and the navigation needs a rollover as it's very simple. And when I see that nav in the header using that icons it reminds me of one thing: PIXEL2LIFE

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 08:00 PM

The content is pretty hard to follow because everything is the same color and size. The pink on green is a bad mix, also.

#6 Rory

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Posted 21 September 2006 - 10:25 PM

Not good use of colours and in a 1024x768 resolution it is too wide by about 20px.

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Posted 22 September 2006 - 01:57 AM

header is pretty nice. I also like the use of icons/logos in the content.

#8 snicket

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Posted 22 September 2006 - 06:11 AM

Okay thx for the comments, i will change the pink/purple colors to somethnig like orange.

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Posted 22 September 2006 - 06:29 AM

It's not bad, but I would give the top right nav some sort of indication fo what each one is. And the logo definitely needs some work.

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Posted 23 September 2006 - 03:50 PM

sites dead for me =(

#11 Illinifan91

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Posted 23 September 2006 - 07:57 PM

page wont load for me.

#12 snicket

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Posted 24 September 2006 - 10:50 AM

its working again, had a server error and was working on it alnight long :P

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Posted 24 September 2006 - 12:46 PM

Looks really nice :P

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Posted 24 September 2006 - 01:02 PM

its rather nice..

Edited by chaoslight, 24 September 2006 - 01:03 PM.


#15 Gibbons

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Posted 25 September 2006 - 08:23 AM

i love the work you have done here. Rounded edges!! get in. im not too sure on the colour scheme tho. but thats personal preference. Looks good still. well done.

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Posted 25 September 2006 - 08:37 AM

i never saw it before but i think it looks pretty good... only two points i have to make

1) the faq icon in the top right, should that not be a question mark? :P

2) the table in the middle with the 5 tuts listed... maybe u should make the cell bg a slightly darker shade and space em by 1 px just so its a bit easier to navigate...

i like it overall, looks good

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Posted 25 September 2006 - 05:38 PM

looks good but a little slow loading, on the navigation mabye have a rolover efeect, and the bar below it with the search box whould be taller it looks weird that short.





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