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[Clandestine]

Just need some C n' C please

Thanks
-Devyn

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Edited by Clandestine, 29 September 2006 - 03:48 PM.

[d2Squared]

if you could explain what it is, and whats it for, then maybe I would understand more
Its ok, nice, but there are some parts there that dont really match

[Clandestine]

its supposed to be something like a japaneses woodcut. But i know what you mean by not really fitting in.

any tips on how i can make it flow more toghether?

Thanks

-Devyn

[d2Squared]

well, like the plants in the front are pretty "out of image" thing, try doing something with them, maybe making them darker. Try using some brushes to give it a more realistic look, more depth will help.
Wait, what program are you using???
The picture looks like you took 2 or 3 pictures together, try connect them somehow.

[Spyder]

in my honest opinion, i really do not like it, your pen tool mountains and photograph of bonsai dont fit, the bonsai is bad hue andrough edges were it hasnt been cut properly. im sory but nothing does fit in there,

I do not mean to be harsh but it is my honest opinion

[Frozen_W]

something is wrong ==> after looking on it for a few minutes I noticed that the perspectieve was wrong, and the way it was cut out, let's it look like, some cheap copy and paste.

The idea is good, but it's not quite finished.
Greetz

[Rory]

The trees at the bottom had too much feathering when they were cut out and the image just looks bland. No offense but it just doesen't excite me.

[Clandestine]

Thanks guys for the comments, heres a lil update.

I dont really know what to do with this.... I might just trash it.

Also the other attached image is kinda the look that i was going for. Mine compares nothing to that one, but w/e

-Devyn

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•  japanese_woodcut3.jpg   58.21K   63 downloads
•  Japanese_woodblockSmallLaye.jpg   97.45K   45 downloads

[d2Squared]

hehe, I was gonna say, "WOW, great Improvement!" hehe, and then I read what you said. Well, the other work isnt very impressing as well. Dont know, not really liking it

[Clandestine]

yea ill prolly just trash it

[N4Z.]

I dont understand what it was you were attempting.. looks like you've selected various things and changed the hu and Saturation..

If you draw something from scratch it will probably look a hellof a lot better.

Keep working at it, don't trash it