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[lipsum1992]

Comments and critism please.

Things I think i need to imrpove:
1 - The belt
2 - Need to add hair
3 - The hands and feet
4 - The nose
5 - The shirt

[lostseed]

lol he looks like mario or luigi
i think the nose and the shape of the head changed woukd make him look better, cuz his head is 1-1/2 his body size, thats really big haha.

[N4Z.]

Lol Chris, what are you doing? He looks freaky..

Things you could do:

A nice sleek afro

lol

[lipsum1992]

Tom, Just cause you wanna be a raste

[d2Squared]

sorry, not liking it at all.
Shapes have no smoothness in them
And it looks like a work done in Paint, lol. no offenece
Try giving it more lights and shades to make it look like a "real" Cartoon
hehe

[lipsum1992]

As i said, my first cartoon. Got the day off school with the flu tommorow so i might sit there working on it. But i gotta get my hosting sorted so gonna be busy.