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[joroco]

hi, seen lots of sites on here so i thought i would post mine and see what you all think...

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[Danny]

Its a nice attempt, it has great potential but needs quite a changes.

First off id change the font, its not a very nice font and really doesnt add to the design at all, rather detracts i should think.

id also remove or lighten the grey, as mixed with the dark blue it really brings the mood and feel of the site down. lightening it or changing it to white would brighten it up alot more and liven the site up.

the header needs more design added to it, and the font should be changed , change it to maybe a script font (hand writing font) and change the effects applied to it.

as i said before add more design to the header, bright up the blue.

Change the navigation, its quite boring, plain and messy.

i dont really understand the two random laptops maybe they serve a purpose i dont know i cant understand the content. but they look silly there so id remove them.

i dont really know what to suggest about the block colours above the chairs, they're the focal point of the site, and look ok but need more design elements adding to them, at current the gradient just doesnt cover it. you need to fade in some images maybe, or fade colour to colour.

also replicating the same chair over and over is quite poor, id put a different type of chair for each, or since its a design site, and im hoping you design more than just the one chair, id place other products up there instead.