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Started by baku_of_tantalus, Oct 12 2006 06:35 AM

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#1 baku_of_tantalus

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Posted 12 October 2006 - 06:35 AM

link rpgpulse.net

name m y l i t t l e w i n d m i l l

this is my personal portfolio. i'm just looking to showcase my works in an attractive way, and (when i get around to it...) build a community (therefor the 'forum' button, which doesnt work yet)...

currently still uploading some images for my folio but that should be done soon.

critique greatly appreciated :)

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Posted 12 October 2006 - 06:36 AM

make it bigger? lol and centered maybe but it looks way to small

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Posted 12 October 2006 - 06:38 AM

Thats awful, sorry, it doesnt do anything for me. :) But keep at it!

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Posted 12 October 2006 - 06:42 AM

View PostTrix06, on Oct 12 2006, 11:38 AM, said:

Thats awful, sorry, it doesnt do anything for me. :) But keep at it!

thanks for the feedback but...anything in particular you dont like? or just doesnt engage you? isnt interesting??

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Posted 12 October 2006 - 10:43 AM

Make it bigger and center it, then you've got a nice layout.

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Posted 12 October 2006 - 10:51 AM

Try adding a bit of shadow maybe (to the white content-box) and add a windmill!

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Posted 12 October 2006 - 04:48 PM

View PostTrix06, on Oct 12 2006, 01:38 PM, said:

Thats awful, sorry, it doesnt do anything for me. :( But keep at it!

Maybe you should read our rules about critiquing.


About the layout, I like the background pattern, it's stylish, altough I agree with RobCullen, I'd center it and make it little bit bigger.

Edited by PSgirl, 12 October 2006 - 04:48 PM.

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Posted 12 October 2006 - 05:26 PM

its cool but way to small!

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Posted 12 October 2006 - 08:53 PM

View PostPSgirl, on Oct 12 2006, 09:48 PM, said:

View PostTrix06, on Oct 12 2006, 01:38 PM, said:

Thats awful, sorry, it doesnt do anything for me. ;) But keep at it!

Maybe you should read our rules about critiquing.


About the layout, I like the background pattern, it's stylish, altough I agree with RobCullen, I'd center it and make it little bit bigger.

thanks for that. but after looking at his website (link in his sig)...i wasnt really bothered about his comment. anyways, im gonna play around with size and positioning. thanks for the critique everyone :(

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Posted 15 October 2006 - 03:24 PM

umm, I really dont mind it, not hating it or anything.
It takes quite a long time for that size of a site to load

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Posted 15 October 2006 - 04:10 PM

looks alright the only bad part about it is that the main area (the headers/menu are well done) is very plane, maybe add some more content to it.

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Posted 18 October 2006 - 05:16 PM

I don't see a reason for a forum on a portfolio site?..

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Posted 18 October 2006 - 10:09 PM

A bit bigger could help, don't really like the background image... but I like the header!

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Posted 19 October 2006 - 09:24 PM

I like the layout...but as everyone says...make it bigger.

Edited by N-sane Noob, 19 October 2006 - 09:25 PM.

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Posted 20 October 2006 - 05:20 AM

Good layout. Hasn't got much 'design flar' too it though. Looks more like a coders portfolio. You might be a coder though, i don't know! lol.

Its not a terrible layout at all. I like it <_<. I think you should develop the content area a little. Try using two columns somehow.

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Posted 20 October 2006 - 06:38 AM

View Postwillsmith727, on Oct 20 2006, 05:20 AM, said:

Good layout. Hasn't got much 'design flar' too it though. Looks more like a coders portfolio. You might be a coder though, i don't know! lol.

Its not a terrible layout at all. I like it :D. I think you should develop the content area a little. Try using two columns somehow.

Yup, I like it too <_<. The size doesnt bother me as long as quality is good :)
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