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#1 Kirbyray

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Posted 20 October 2006 - 09:06 PM

C&C Welcomed and appriciated. This is my first time trying something like this.
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P.S. Post #111... I felt it needed to be said!

Edited by Kirbyray, 20 October 2006 - 09:20 PM.


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Posted 23 October 2006 - 12:46 PM

Omgosh its awesome! I love the way the guy is poping out lol kind of reminds me of paintball. But remember the max kb limit is 60.

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Posted 23 October 2006 - 04:04 PM

Whoops! Forgot to save it for the site, I'll get around to that soon. In the meantime I'll change it. And thanks for the comment.

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 10:39 AM

View PostKirbyray, on Oct 23 2006, 05:04 PM, said:

Whoops! Forgot to save it for the site, I'll get around to that soon. In the meantime I'll change it. And thanks for the comment.

Decent, kind of plain.. not my style If I were to rate it out of 10 i'd be giving you around a 7.5/10
Nice work though!

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 04:22 PM

I like it ,it's different not my cup of tea, but it's good!!

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 04:54 PM

its boring and blurry try makinf it crisp and use things like blurs.

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 07:02 PM

Hmmm... well here is V2, more blur, less boring, more crisp and under the 60kb limit;
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Any thoughts?

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 08:25 PM

View PostKirbyray, on Oct 25 2006, 08:02 PM, said:

Hmmm... well here is V2, more blur, less boring, more crisp and under the 60kb limit;
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Any thoughts?

I happen to like the 1st one better, its more clear.
What I like about the second that it is more exciting.

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 10:11 PM

yea 1st one is better and it looks like a wide wide screen tv lol, but why name it fly if theres nothing to do with a fly or flying? maybe you should do a hand glider on it :P

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Posted 26 October 2006 - 02:26 PM

Well, I just put the sky in there for the "fly" effect. I appriciate the criticism, and I will think about it in my next project but I think this sig needs to be slapped with a big FAIL stamp.

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Posted 26 October 2006 - 06:24 PM

View PostKirbyray, on Oct 26 2006, 08:26 PM, said:

Well, I just put the sky in there for the "fly" effect. I appriciate the criticism, and I will think about it in my next project but I think this sig needs to be slapped with a big FAIL stamp.
the sig is nice just write something else on it like sky vector or something :huh:

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Posted 27 October 2006 - 06:54 PM

the second version is alot better well done.





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