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#1 Propax

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Posted 11 December 2006 - 04:32 PM

Here is my new layout, I have been playing around with the site for a while and had many different designs, but this one has stuck, Hope you all like it

http://www.jamstreetmedia.com

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Posted 19 December 2006 - 10:05 AM

I am unsure if I missed something, but I do not see the appeal to this site.

1. First thing I noticed was the insane paragraph copyright notice, that so tacky! Link it to another page in your iFrame atleast with a ©2006 JSM. Then scare everyone away from that page.

2. You have limited yourself to an EXTREMELY small space, I see absolutely no purpose or reason for it.

3. Your words contradict eachother; 'Contact Us', but who is "Us" when you say "Me" throughout the entire site? You should fix Contact Us to Contact Me. Or decide, is this a freelance site or a business, or even a group of freelancers.

My honest feedback is that you have a website with services that don't look like they will deliver based on the site I'm looking at.

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Posted 19 December 2006 - 10:18 AM

as above... 1 other question, how is a forum sig costing £25 and a wallpaper £10? lol

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Posted 19 December 2006 - 11:25 AM

Understood all of the above, I know this sounds really bad but I rushed the site abit just so I could have it uploaded, then I was going to work on it step by step, I also forgot to change the buttons to "contact" instead of "contact us". I have been working hard on a new layout and yes my pricing is messed up, purely for the fact that I wasn't thinkng logically (which is the norm for me:P). Also I have restricted my space beacuse I personally don't like to scroll lots on websites and I have just built it to how I like it, although there is not alot of content on my site. Below is a new layout, hope you approve of this one.
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Posted 19 December 2006 - 11:48 AM

certainly an improvement, good luck m8

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Posted 19 December 2006 - 04:23 PM

There is definately more room for improvements on the image you posted above. The font does not fit and your still not taking advantage of the space available!

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Posted 19 December 2006 - 06:15 PM

What improvements would you suggest, I want the site to look crisp and clean and not to crowded.





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