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#1 zoom4267

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 03:48 PM

This is my first portfolio. I made it in PS and put it into DW8.

Portfolio --click here

what do you think, anything missing that i should have?

Appreciate it

Lisa

Edited by zoom4267, 03 January 2007 - 09:05 PM.


#2 zoom4267

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 04:21 PM

View Post. Adam ., on Jan 3 2007, 03:50 PM, said:

Going to link us to it?

- Adam :P

oops


btw, im at a loss for the home page as to what to put on it

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 04:37 PM

ummm, link?

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 04:42 PM

View Postd2Squared, on Jan 3 2007, 04:37 PM, said:

ummm, link?


click on "portfolio"

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 06:53 PM

Looks good, maybe change the links to a blue instead of read so it matches more.

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 07:00 PM

View PostdEcade, on Jan 3 2007, 06:53 PM, said:

Looks good, maybe change the links to a blue instead of read so it matches more.

dEcade


thanks, ill try it in blue

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 07:16 PM

Yeah, also, your frontpage is in Arial, so maybe have everything else following suite (eg. Menu, other pages etc.)

I like your concept though... very nice. 8/10

#8 zoom4267

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 07:22 PM

View PostBug, on Jan 3 2007, 07:16 PM, said:

Yeah, also, your frontpage is in Arial, so maybe have everything else following suite (eg. Menu, other pages etc.)

I like your concept though... very nice. 8/10



ok, ill check that. thanks for the rating . what would make it better?

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Posted 05 January 2007 - 07:24 PM

Needs to be spaced out more and the gradients need to be a little smaller. Logo needs work and the font should be Verdana or something ... smaller? But definately stay with those colours. Good luck :)

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Posted 06 January 2007 - 07:43 AM

View PostZero.Dub, on Jan 5 2007, 07:24 PM, said:

Needs to be spaced out more and the gradients need to be a little smaller. Logo needs work and the font should be Verdana or something ... smaller? But definately stay with those colours. Good luck ;)

What do you mean for the logo, to plain?

thanks

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Posted 06 January 2007 - 03:17 PM

Extremely plain is what i meant.

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Posted 06 January 2007 - 03:36 PM

I not liking it, sorry. I think it's not well positioned, its on the left, its extrmely black. Font needs to be changed, Nav is kinda boring. I am not really getting the design there, kinda weird. All i can tell you is play more with it.

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Posted 06 January 2007 - 06:51 PM

View Postd2Squared, on Jan 6 2007, 03:36 PM, said:

I not liking it, sorry. I think it's not well positioned, its on the left, its extrmely black. Font needs to be changed, Nav is kinda boring. I am not really getting the design there, kinda weird. All i can tell you is play more with it.



i hear ya and i agree. ive been thinking about it all day and i am going to redesign it. im going to stay with the black but get rid of the boxes.

thanks alot everyone





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