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#1 Melvin Jose

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Posted 01 March 2007 - 09:12 PM

Hi' I'm new on the forum.. Thought it would be a good idea to start of with some art of mine...

So what you guys think of my latest creation? (click for full-sized)

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Posted 01 March 2007 - 10:02 PM

good job on that, i like the colors :)
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Posted 01 March 2007 - 11:35 PM

Dude... very inspirational!! :D Nice job :)

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Posted 02 March 2007 - 01:15 PM

hmm,
did you make it all yourself ?
i would have a very hard time beliveing that !,
u used brushes and free resourses psd's diden't u ?..

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Posted 02 March 2007 - 01:32 PM

View PostAngel Eyes, on Mar 2 2007, 01:15 PM, said:

hmm,
did you make it all yourself ?
i would have a very hard time beliveing that !,
u used brushes and free resourses psd's diden't u ?..

Why is it hard to believe hes made it? Because hes just joined the forum? Doesn't mean he has no skills.

As the the image I love it, it reminds me of a dance album cover. Amazing, I'd like to know what you used dude.

As in templates, etc filters if any

Edited by Vandalised, 02 March 2007 - 01:33 PM.


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Posted 02 March 2007 - 02:48 PM

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Why is it hard to believe hes made it? Because hes just joined the forum? Doesn't mean he has no skills.

Let me explain,
you see the vector circels, they are realy realy sweet ( and i think i have seen a free psd's with them)
but then look at the background it's poor and bad made,
wrong color choice, text is poor, and 2 roses are try to be blended in with a bad result,

anyways, if he could make them cirkels so good, then why is the rest so bad ???,
and i never said anything about his post count !!

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Posted 02 March 2007 - 03:26 PM

I must agree with angle eyes that i got a confused impression when looking at the image. Due to the mixed quallity of the different elements. The glossy disks, exelent. The big purple dont push button, realy cheep looking. Ornaments, super. Those shadowmaps of roses, out of context. Overall compo, averange the right side looks realy bussy while the left side looks deserted, the small circles at the upper right fail to give a deaph effect due to islanding all of the small cirkles on top. The sky of stars looks messy. It should have some diffeent brisghtnesses in the stars to give a impression of deaph.

The picture overall isnt bad, its just that like angel eyes said, the quality isnt constant it looks like pieces from different puzzles with different pricetags have been put together. Im not flaming the picture, it does look good. Not amazing but good. Keep up the works and study what you think is good others have made and you will become better in what you make. Keep up the good work. ^_^

Edited by Dance, 02 March 2007 - 03:37 PM.


#8 Melvin Jose

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Posted 04 March 2007 - 04:20 PM

LoLz... Pro commenting I must say.

I just started using photoshop. I have done little shopping in the past but getting back into it.

The circle I made using the eliptical marquee tool. Filling the circle and making the selection smaller and smaller. It's not actually vector but it has that vectorry look to it, hence the 'sortalike vector'. It did take some time but its very easy (read alot of tutorials and did a little art seeing)

Bad color choice? Ok.. haha, to an amature like me it looked pretty cool though. I have to look more into picking colors i guess.

The 2 swirly things are free brushes yes. I hope thats not a problem? I can't remember who made them. Credz to the ones that made them because I like them. :) Next time I will say iff I used a free brush.

Text is poor? Oh ok.. Again I thought it looked cool. Must be because my eyes haven't seen as much art as you have seen prolly.

The button I kinda made accedentially. I was just messing about until I got that thing and I just put some text over it.

The stars I threw in to fill it up more.

I know that the left side is kinda empty but I couldn't really be bothered moving everything towards the centre.

I hope this clears things up a little bit. Overall this thing is one of the coolest things I ever made (I'm a starter!). I'm not good at drawing so I use stuff to spice it up. I hope you guys don't think thats a bad thing? I made another piece and I would like to know what you guys think so I will make another thread.





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