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#1 Inzpired

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Posted 04 March 2007 - 07:09 AM

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Please critique :(

Edited by Inzpired, 04 March 2007 - 07:20 AM.


#2 Dance

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Posted 04 March 2007 - 07:23 AM

Looks like a chiaroscuro grunge sig to me, only abit bigger. Cant say i do like it very much, the composision is weard.

#3 bĘko

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Posted 04 March 2007 - 07:47 AM

muh better then your beyonce one.. this one has nice depth, nice effects.. BUT

colors, text as bad and you have to brighten it up just a bit..

gj :)

#4 Inzpired

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Posted 04 March 2007 - 11:08 AM

Thanks for your comments...
I keep on working

#5 Atomica

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Posted 04 March 2007 - 11:27 AM

very grungylike, good job :)

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Posted 04 March 2007 - 11:28 AM

Much better dan your previous artworks :)
The text should be bigger and more readable, and i not really like the lighting, the faces are too lighten and the rest of it is too dark.

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Posted 04 March 2007 - 04:41 PM

I really like it.. just maybe make the text bigger, and more brighter. Maybe even add a glow to the text to make it a little more vibrant. But nice concept! :)

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Posted 04 March 2007 - 05:25 PM

Yeyah... it's kinda bit hard to comprehend what's going on though... but maybe that's because I'm in a dark room at the moment :)

Great concept though! ;)

Edited by Bug, 04 March 2007 - 05:25 PM.






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