Please critique
Edited by Inzpired, 04 March 2007 - 07:20 AM.
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Critique please.. three 6 mafia
Started by Inzpired, Mar 04 2007 07:09 AM
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 07:09 AM
Please critique
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 07:23 AM
Looks like a chiaroscuro grunge sig to me, only abit bigger. Cant say i do like it very much, the composision is weard.
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 07:47 AM
muh better then your beyonce one.. this one has nice depth, nice effects.. BUT
colors, text as bad and you have to brighten it up just a bit..
gj
colors, text as bad and you have to brighten it up just a bit..
gj
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 11:08 AM
Thanks for your comments...
I keep on working
I keep on working
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 11:27 AM
very grungylike, good job
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 11:28 AM
Much better dan your previous artworks
The text should be bigger and more readable, and i not really like the lighting, the faces are too lighten and the rest of it is too dark.
The text should be bigger and more readable, and i not really like the lighting, the faces are too lighten and the rest of it is too dark.
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 04:41 PM
I really like it.. just maybe make the text bigger, and more brighter. Maybe even add a glow to the text to make it a little more vibrant. But nice concept! 
Brandon
Brandon
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 05:25 PM
Yeyah... it's kinda bit hard to comprehend what's going on though... but maybe that's because I'm in a dark room at the moment 
Great concept though!
Great concept though!
Edited by Bug, 04 March 2007 - 05:25 PM.
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