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#1 Brandonador

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Posted 05 March 2007 - 10:24 AM

I just finished this..

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Hope you all like it! :) Feel free to use it as your desktop background if you like :). Would appreciate some feedback, thanks!

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Posted 05 March 2007 - 01:47 PM

Sorry but i don't really like it.
I think the colors you have used don't match and the heart doesn't look good. I also don't like the brushes you've used. The concept is nice though.

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Keep on working.

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Posted 05 March 2007 - 01:56 PM

i really like how you made this but i think the background color could be better.
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Posted 05 March 2007 - 05:14 PM

Nice im using it now:)

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Posted 08 March 2007 - 10:09 AM

I don't think it depicts a heart of sorrow. I would expect a broken heart, possibly bleeding, much darker colors for the background.

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Posted 08 March 2007 - 01:54 PM

The shapes are great, but man you have messed up the colors and compo. There is way to much space between the two symbols. All fine if there where connecting elements but its just empty right now, like looking on two separate pictures on the same canvas. The background color is in my opinion horrible but then again mintgreen have'nt been in fasion sience the 80s, or so iv been told. The background needs more work then a gradient to do it justice, hell i even think a solid background work prove better then that gradient. Id try something darker mixed with elements of light. But Gj on the shapeworks those look awsome. :)

(Flame mintgreen the spawn of hell (=80s, or so iv been told.))

Edited by Dance, 08 March 2007 - 01:56 PM.






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