Constructive criticism please.
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Started by Vandalised, Mar 07 2007 03:01 PM
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Posted 07 March 2007 - 03:01 PM
Here it is boys and girls; I have the PSD available if anyone accuses it of not being my work
Constructive criticism please.
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Constructive criticism please.
pinky.png 187.25K
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 02:53 AM
, sry man don't like it,
things looks blured or maybe glow,
looks like 5 brushes and a bad gradient,
misses colors,
and looks to messy, but 2 simple at same time,
.Angel
things looks blured or maybe glow,
looks like 5 brushes and a bad gradient,
misses colors,
and looks to messy, but 2 simple at same time,
.Angel
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 04:24 AM
Ok.. Well no brushes were used and yeh a glow was used on the cricles. It's ment to be slightly blury ;s If it's that bad give something I could change? 
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 04:28 AM
I think it's different.. And I like it!
The glow, the shapes etc. all great!
Looks like a loading screen for a girls operating system
Good job!
(Also, no one will accuse you of it not being yours unless there was a hint of jealousy )
The glow, the shapes etc. all great!
Looks like a loading screen for a girls operating system
Good job!
(Also, no one will accuse you of it not being yours unless there was a hint of jealousy
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 04:30 AM
S0ULJA., on Mar 8 2007, 04:28 AM, said:
I think it's different.. And I like it!
The glow, the shapes etc. all great!
Looks like a loading screen for a girls operating system
Good job!
(Also, no one will accuse you of it not being yours unless there was a hint of jealousy )
The glow, the shapes etc. all great!
Looks like a loading screen for a girls operating system
Good job!
(Also, no one will accuse you of it not being yours unless there was a hint of jealousy
)Cheers man, haha what do you mean hint of jealousy towards what?
O you mean if someone got jealous. I see
Edited by Vandalised, 08 March 2007 - 04:32 AM.
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 06:10 AM
It would prolly look cool on a t-shirt.
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 10:51 AM
Melvin Jose, on Mar 8 2007, 06:10 AM, said:
It would prolly look cool on a t-shirt.
Yeh thats a pretty good idea lol, thanks for the comments guys but can anyone give me some ideas on what to add or change?
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 11:04 AM
Pretty cool but a bit too much glow
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 12:49 PM
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 01:29 PM
shandaman, on Mar 8 2007, 12:38 PM, said:
Decent job, but pink 
Haha pink is a great colour have a pink shirt which I wear ;D
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 02:01 PM
nothings wrong with pink, its just that....
Lolipop lolipop, Uuh loli loli loli.
Lolipop lolipop, Uuh loli loli loli.
Yeah... its pink allright and i got this crappy long forgoten song on my head just by looking at it.
Lolipop lolipop, Uuh loli loli loli.
Lolipop lolipop, Uuh loli loli loli.
Yeah... its pink allright and i got this crappy long forgoten song on my head just by looking at it.
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 04:06 PM
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Lolipop lolipop, Uuh loli loli loli.
Lolipop lolipop, Uuh loli loli loli.
Yeah... its pink allright and i got this crappy long forgoten song on my head just by looking at it.
Lolipop lolipop, Uuh loli loli loli.
Yeah... its pink allright and i got this crappy long forgoten song on my head just by looking at it.
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Posted 08 March 2007 - 08:28 PM
I really like it. But a little too bright in my opinion. But, other than that; awesome job!
Brandon
But a little too bright in my opinion. But, other than that; awesome job!Brandon
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Posted 09 March 2007 - 09:40 AM
yeah, hes right, way to pink, which is really bad unless you are a chick or totally metro.. i would try it out with more colors.
But its clean and professional, good work
But its clean and professional, good work
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Posted 10 March 2007 - 12:42 PM
Dirk Black, on Mar 9 2007, 09:40 AM, said:
yeah, hes right, way to pink, which is really bad unless you are a chick or totally metro.. i would try it out with more colors.
But its clean and professional, good work
But its clean and professional, good work
err I like pink and I'm not bisexual, homosexual, can safely say I'm perfectly straight lol. Just confident about my sexuality really.. But yeh I'll try it in some other colours which more people will appericate.
Thanks for the comments.
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