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[WIP] Rising from the Ashes


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#1 legendaryfox

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Posted 16 March 2007 - 03:58 PM

A piece i was thinking about while in school....it still feels emptyish...

anyway, the idea was to have the phoenix kinda coming out of a human, but I didn't really feel up to modelling a humanoid [anyone wanna send me / point me to free 3D bipeds :( i don't really need features, just a basic rigged biped human would be nice...]. For the phoenix i basically started with a red, orange, and yellow dot, and used PS's smudge tool to drag it all out.

Iuno, it feels like it's missing a lot. any ideas?

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#2 d2Squared

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Posted 16 March 2007 - 04:10 PM

I am really liking that booom effect, really nice.

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Posted 16 March 2007 - 04:54 PM

It is a really nice piece of artwork!! I would have liked the phoenix to be a bit more visible, but you've done an excellent job!!

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Posted 17 March 2007 - 09:05 AM

alrighties...try #2...dunno if this is overdoing it or not...

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C+C please, still doesn't feel very 'phoenix'y...

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Posted 17 March 2007 - 10:19 PM

Yeah, I think you've overdone the job in that one... maybe you need a better perspective/depth between the phoenix and the background... so that the bird stands out better?

Edited by Bug, 17 March 2007 - 10:19 PM.






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