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#1 Strkyor

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Posted 25 March 2007 - 12:53 PM

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Rate it please :blink:

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Posted 25 March 2007 - 01:06 PM

Sorry don't really like it although the idea isn't bad...

Try to work on it. :blink:

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Posted 26 March 2007 - 07:13 AM

dont you like the render or what is it?

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Posted 26 March 2007 - 08:41 AM

The text is a bit unreadable and i think you should add a border to it. The upper left corner looks a bit weird, i think the blending just isn't that good. Also his fingers are too blurred...
Like it's color and the idea.

Maybe some guys that have more experience in photoshopping can help you become better :biggrin:

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Posted 26 March 2007 - 09:48 AM

K thank you..

Any advanced photoshop user who can help me?

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Posted 27 March 2007 - 06:41 AM

I wouldn't say I am advance but I am pretty creative. If you send me that render I will create something that maybe you could copy, I will also send you the editable PSD fo rlearning purposes.

Your idea is pretty good it just needs some TLC.

Keep it up :D

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Posted 27 March 2007 - 11:22 AM

You really need to work on some of your blending abilities. I like what you have going on in it but its just a little choppy the way you've blended him in there. His hand disappears and theres like bubbles over his head. You should tone down the left top a little bit and work on blending. The text is too small and hard to see. Remember you don't always need great text work something simple and sweet in the right spot always does the job just fine.





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