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#1 wm.AngelEyes

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Posted 08 May 2007 - 07:01 AM

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#2 Bug

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Posted 08 May 2007 - 08:04 AM

Looks really good to me :secret:

I'm just wondering why you chose that position to put all that artwork in front of the man :D lol :D Just kidding

I like what you've done with his shoes but I feel the dark sky needs something else

#3 wm.AngelEyes

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Posted 08 May 2007 - 10:08 AM

yeah, and it's to bright in the middle, and the dod's have to go,
it messed up, hate my computer at school, colors and everything just looks diffrent on that

#4 Loken

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Posted 08 May 2007 - 10:45 AM

Two things get me here. Firstly, the line, the one on the right, doesn't go very well i don't think and the atwork is a bit too busy, it detracts away from what it is you're trying to promote, presumably the clothes that dude is wearing. Could do with being simpler.

#5 wm.AngelEyes

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Posted 08 May 2007 - 02:07 PM

well, i like it being busy, i like that it's a blast.

#6 Melvin Jose

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Posted 08 May 2007 - 02:48 PM

It really looks good. Nice colors and the shoes look sweet also.
It's a bit of a shame that the text and letters aren't smooth

#7 wm.AngelEyes

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Posted 09 May 2007 - 01:43 AM

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