yeah, and it's to bright in the middle, and the dod's have to go,
it messed up, hate my computer at school, colors and everything just looks diffrent on that
Two things get me here. Firstly, the line, the one on the right, doesn't go very well i don't think and the atwork is a bit too busy, it detracts away from what it is you're trying to promote, presumably the clothes that dude is wearing. Could do with being simpler.