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#1 Propax

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Posted 11 May 2007 - 06:25 PM

Here is the latest version, I tried to discreetly hide my name, I also tried to make the background flow by using the same image. I also added those's refelction.

Again, C&C's are very welcome.

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Posted 11 May 2007 - 06:33 PM

Indeed it's better but did it realy need a new thread?

Edited by Dance, 11 May 2007 - 06:34 PM.


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Posted 11 May 2007 - 06:41 PM

Wow!! This one is looking really really spiff!! Great job on those reflections and everything else :P You hid your name really really well as well - it took me ages to find it :D

10/10!

Only thing I don't really like now is the gradient to white up the top

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Posted 11 May 2007 - 10:45 PM

yeah it's alot better then the old one... nice job man

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Posted 11 May 2007 - 10:54 PM

wow.. i like how u put ur name on one of the buildings :D.. NICELY DONE mah friend :P!

#6 Propax

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Posted 12 May 2007 - 06:41 AM

Hey thanks for all your comments and critiques. I will be making some more soon, just to let you know :D.

Thanks again

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Posted 14 May 2007 - 09:26 AM

darken the other lights in the building so ones in the picture frame darken and the ones outside darken more then spell your name in a lighter colour so its easier on the eye compared to what u have now. No offence but it could do with fitting into the picture a little more!


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Posted 14 May 2007 - 11:31 AM

Nice updates Propax!

One thing that would be a neat change...where you have your name at I notice the P goes across the corner of the building. Maybe you could make it a little smaller and have it fit the contour/angles of the building so it's like your name is actually mounted to it (like the do in a lot of credits).

A LOT better than the first!





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