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#1 kozine

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Posted 02 June 2007 - 02:55 PM

Hey guys,

My website iambenyoule.info has had a revamp and now has a new purpose.

This website will now serve as my online portfolio and services portal.

Due to this change a new design was needed.

www.iambenyoule.info

No pages are done yet except the index which has the dummy text.

Please comment on the layout!

#2 PSgirl

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Posted 02 June 2007 - 04:10 PM

Looks good so far.
The main problem I see is that text in 'Welcome' and 'Services' rectangles looks too blurred (I can see they're images, I'm not sure why, but if you want to use images there, turn off the anti-aliasing in Photoshop to make text clear :D )
Apart from that, I'd leave a left margin in your lorem ipsum text.

#3 kozine

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Posted 02 June 2007 - 04:13 PM

Thanks for the comments :D I'll turn off the anti-aliasing and upload them. Ill do a left margin aswell.

Also, does the navigation look out of place?

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Posted 04 June 2007 - 08:02 AM

I find the purple text hard to read.

Also, you'll really want to make the text under welcome and services (at least the content text...not title) actual text, not an image. Wherever possible always make text actual text. This will give you quicker load times, easier updates and better SEO.

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Posted 04 June 2007 - 02:15 PM

nice one :P.. i like the colors :D.. nicely done.. petty arranged :D

#6 Hoot

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Posted 04 June 2007 - 08:29 PM

Looks good but the purple is a little hard on the eyes.

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#7 gotfrap

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Posted 06 June 2007 - 05:19 AM

I don't think the color scheme goes with the design.





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